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Pain

Dark dense clouds in pain Wandering incessantly All over the sky Condensed loneliness of soul In the melancholy rain ________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Vladislav Raven
Date: 8/14/2016 7:41:00 AM
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Hi Probir, i have begun to like the shorter forms more as i have read them. Haiku and Tanka are two of my favourites. I am glad that i looked in on this Tanka today. In your five lines the images flow so easily. The content is perfect for this peace. Every line just fits in so easily with the next. An excellent Tanka. As i say Probir, it does sing. I have no favourite line, if i were to pick one it would be every one. This is a definite seven....Mike.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 11:03:00 AM
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Shorter forms can speak longer and a sensitive reader listens to it still longer ... this is what I feel ... Thank you for your pithy note ...
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Pheko Motaung
Date: 8/13/2016 10:46:00 PM
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A true classic inspiring masterpiece!you're at your best beloved poet
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:01:00 AM
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Thank you ...
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Daver Austin
Date: 8/10/2016 2:34:00 PM
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With me the short form is king because it charges the imagination with infinite variety. Love the one. Love, daver
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/10/2016 8:59:00 PM
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/10/2016 11:51:00 AM
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The earth is, indeed, a living, breathing organism--often brooding for out relationship. Well said, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/10/2016 9:00:00 PM
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
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a great image of that melancholy rain, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:15:00 PM
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Thank you ....
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/9/2016 2:56:00 PM
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Whew. You drug out a lot with such concise precision. Beautiful
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:16:00 PM
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Thank you ...
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/9/2016 10:22:00 AM
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Great imagery - nicely written tanka - Jesse
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:16:00 PM
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/9/2016 8:08:00 AM
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- Really touching .... great written, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:17:00 PM
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2016 7:01:00 AM
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Beautiful but sad Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/9/2016 5:22:00 AM
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An outstanding visualization of pain. Loved it.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 6:18:00 AM
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Thank you ...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/9/2016 1:44:00 AM
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Superb Tanka! Poetic apotheosis dear, Probir. A seven
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 6:25:00 AM
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Thank you dear Friend ... But I wander near the bottom ...

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