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Ordinary Precious Stones

Ordinary Precious Stones Buddha saw it first but as is his way never let me in on it. The stones, rough, unfinished, ill sized tribute to chaos, beckoned. I closed my eyes It started to take shape in the mist. Each stone should have its place separate yet dependent on the others. They should not attract attention for themselves but become a part of a greater beauty. I touched each stone, listened to its passion, rolled it, positioned it so the sun would augment its finest facets. Allowing them time to adjust, to relate themselves one to another. When each stone hummed in wind coaxed OMMMMM I rested, placed the Buddha in the midst of these, now precious, stones. Each morning I look out on the Buddha in the midst of his rock garden, see the sun creep over his shoulder glancing off the facets of those most ordinary precious stones. Submitted to – Precious Stones and Gems – Poetry contest Sponsor – Anthony Slausen 11/14/2014

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Date: 11/30/2014 2:03:00 AM
John,Awesome win ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/27/2014 5:46:00 PM
So glad to see this one placed high. A well deserved win, John. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:40:00 AM
O great John. yes those are the most precious stones. Congrats on win.Love ....rajat
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:35:00 AM
This poem is a precious gem. Very well written and just sings out peacefully. Congratulations on your very much deserved first place win John.
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:30:00 PM
John an amazing write! Congrats on ur top podium!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma for your continued support.
Date: 11/22/2014 8:33:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your top win for this contest! You created a very visual image of the precious stones, and I felt their mysticism in your words. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:41:00 AM
Sandra, there are solar lights in the garden and the quaint ritual of the house is when they come on in the evening one of us will announce ..."and the lights are on at Buddha Park"
Date: 11/22/2014 5:29:00 PM
This is so different, what a gem..congrats. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, the inspiration was easy, I just looked out the window at the garden.
Date: 11/22/2014 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this superb write.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:38:00 AM
Than you Maurice for you comment and your poetry.
Date: 11/22/2014 4:54:00 PM
congratulations on your win ,wonderful contribution.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Robert for your interest and comment
Date: 11/22/2014 4:36:00 PM
So true, precious is a feeling I am in constant search of being & helping others to feel so- all things are equally precious to Higher power, all his/her children anything or anyone loved is precious. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 11/22/2014 4:32:00 PM
Hi John, this is incredible. I love it! Congrats on a wonderful free verse
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Mark, the poetic forms are demanding and I find it very liberating to let the muse run loose on occasion.
Date: 11/22/2014 3:56:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your top placement:-) Hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Jan for your continuing support and comments.
Date: 11/18/2014 12:41:00 AM
wow , yours has the best MESSAGE for us of all the ones I am seeing. Very creative, john. ME LIKES
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2014 9:33:00 AM
And very heavy, Andrea, but beautiful. The garden was one of those endeavors that took its own lead, guiding every movement. Thanks for your support.
Date: 11/14/2014 7:42:00 PM
Love the unique take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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