Ordinary Precious Stones

Ordinary Precious Stones


Buddha saw it first
but as is his way never let me in on it.
The stones, rough, unfinished,
ill sized tribute to chaos, beckoned.

I closed my eyes
It started to take shape in the mist.
Each stone should have its place
separate yet dependent on the others.
They should not attract attention for themselves
but become a part of a greater beauty.

I touched each stone, listened to its passion,
rolled it, positioned it so the sun would
augment its finest facets.  Allowing them time
to adjust, to relate themselves one to another.

When each stone hummed in wind coaxed OMMMMM
I rested, placed the Buddha in the midst
of these, now precious, stones.

Each morning I look out on the Buddha
in the midst of his rock garden, see the
sun creep over his shoulder glancing off
the facets of those most ordinary
precious stones.


Submitted to – Precious Stones and Gems – Poetry contest
Sponsor – Anthony Slausen
11/14/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 30, 2014 at 2:03 AM
John,Awesome win ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:46 PM
So glad to see this one placed high. A well deserved win, John. Congratulations.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:40 AM
O great John. yes those are the most precious stones. Congrats on win.Love ....rajat
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:35 AM
This poem is a precious gem. Very well written and just sings out peacefully. Congratulations on your very much deserved first place win John.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:30 PM
John an amazing write! Congrats on ur top podium!
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma for your continued support.
Haight Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:33 PM
John, Congratulations on your top win for this contest! You created a very visual image of the precious stones, and I felt their mysticism in your words. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Sandra, there are solar lights in the garden and the quaint ritual of the house is when they come on in the evening one of us will announce ..."and the lights are on at Buddha Park"
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:29 PM
This is so different, what a gem..congrats. BG
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Thanks Barbara, the inspiration was easy, I just looked out the window at the garden.
Yvonne Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations on your win with this superb write.
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Than you Maurice for you comment and your poetry.
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:54 PM
congratulations on your win ,wonderful contribution.
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Robert for your interest and comment
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:36 PM
So true, precious is a feeling I am in constant search of being & helping others to feel so- all things are equally precious to Higher power, all his/her children anything or anyone loved is precious. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Thanks Debbie
Trichet Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Hi John, this is incredible. I love it! Congrats on a wonderful free verse
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Mark, the poetic forms are demanding and I find it very liberating to let the muse run loose on occasion.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:56 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your top placement:-) Hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Jan for your continuing support and comments.
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:41 AM
wow , yours has the best MESSAGE for us of all the ones I am seeing. Very creative, john. ME LIKES
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:33 AM
And very heavy, Andrea, but beautiful. The garden was one of those endeavors that took its own lead, guiding every movement. Thanks for your support.
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Love the unique take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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