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Eight Words Contest July 2024 Joseph May sponsor
Dazzling, synthetic lights emanate from polished silver, Penetrating my deep, chemically induced sleep. Blinking sensitive eyes, I raise my swirling head. I sit up and walk into a corridor of glass display cases. Rustic farm tools, mannequins wearing clothing from the past and present fashions, pottery from long ago… A collection of some kind, featuring timeless treasures and ordinary items of little to no monetary value. A discombobulated hoard of flea market finds? I came to another display difficult to make sense of…another display of mannequins except these wore no clothing and floated in some viscous liquid. A chill went up my spine and I knew not why until…one opened their eyes and looked at me! I awaken. Bright sunlight streams into my bedroom windows. I recall everything in a moment of time. Sitting up, pain and horror, a poisonous flower blossom opening red petals in my mind… A nightmare or mad illusion? I see nothing but my room, and hear nothing now but… … silence.

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Date: 7/28/2024 5:12:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2024 7:27:00 AM
Ty for the contest, so challenging!
Date: 7/27/2024 11:09:00 PM
Scary Crystol! When the mannequin opens their eyes. I like "flower blossom opening red petals in my mind". It sounds like a a bad trip!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2024 7:28:00 AM
Ha right?! Yikes...ty for stopping in David, alway good to hear from you! Xo
Date: 7/27/2024 8:28:00 PM
congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2024 7:28:00 AM
Tysm!
Date: 7/27/2024 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write/story. Will there be a part 2???  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/27/2024 10:15:00 AM
Oh thanks so much Paula, you're such a good sport, always congratulating everyone in a contest! I try to get to all myself but sometimes time runs out for me. Ty for your positivity and effort! Hum.. part 2?! Maybe! Xoxo.
Date: 7/22/2024 6:00:00 AM
Ooh we're going down spooky lane? Whether it's twilight zone inspired or the show you reference (can't recall the name just now) it has its certain fascination. And your writing continues to improve Crys. We're so glad you're here with us
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/22/2024 6:42:00 AM
Ha ha yes! Tysm Tom! I am seeing improvements as well and it's super exciting! PS and my neighbors here, including my good neighbor, Tom, have inspired and assisted me as I grow and learn. I'm so grateful! Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/22/2024 6:00:00 AM
X files!
Date: 7/22/2024 2:10:00 AM
"A nightmare or mad illusion? I see nothing but my room, and hear nothing now but silence." These days silence has a lot more to say. Great piece.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/22/2024 4:40:00 AM
I'm grateful you stopped by for a read, thanks! You are a lovely writer and I'm honored. Xo
Date: 7/20/2024 12:14:00 PM
This past.year I have been watching the X Files for the first time. Your poem catches its essence well. Very nicely written.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/21/2024 9:59:00 AM
Thanks! I used to watch the show and loved it! Xo

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