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Oh, To Be Again - Bedeviled

The night is frosted glass. Daylight’s clouds - restless like my love - and scattered wildly heretofore - somehow made a pact to nimbly rearrange themselves. Congealing in this chilling autumn eve - translucent - the clouds have blended in with dusk, obliterating stars. . . and even shadows. Luna, sad like me, cannot transmit her moonlight to cheer me. Oh, to be again - bedeviled! To see your unique come-hither smile; to hear the sound of honey in your voice; to feel that splendid tingle within me as you shine your gorgeous eyes - radiant upon me! Where are you now, my love - my sweet, alluring boy? And where are the stars that blazed for me within your eyes? Where is the crystal nightfall of my fondest dream? Oh, to feel again. . . enraptured! But not even the smallest gleam of you remains. And not even Goddess Moon can penetrate this deep abiding gloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2020 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story you did tell. Enjoy your day and win......
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Date: 5/16/2020 1:09:00 PM
So lovely, Andrea - dreamy as moonlight with just right touch of wistful longing and pensive moments. Congratulations my friend.
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:02:00 AM
A sad lament and yearning...congratulations Andrea. A wonderful winner.
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:06:00 AM
Picturesque Bravo. your first place win
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Date: 5/16/2020 1:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Andrea. Congrats on getting thru love finding you like that! CayCay
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Date: 5/16/2020 12:49:00 AM
Ah, free verse is the key! "To hear the sound of honey in your voice" is such a nice line. Congrats!
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Date: 11/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
Very romantic, great imagery, loved it.
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Date: 8/9/2014 1:43:00 AM
WOW Andrea, I have read hundreds of your poems and this is without a doubt one of your best in my opinion! What I like most is your references to the moon and stars all through the poem... 'Where is the crystal nightfall of my fondest dream?' Oh yes indeed...Congrats my friend and thanks for faving my entry - Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:15:00 PM
Loved the romanticism within these words Andrea. Congrats
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:48:00 PM
Very passionate write,Andrea.Beautifully penned too. Congratulations on your well deserved win!Thanks for your visit to my 'For Gaza' poem and the expression of anti-war feeling.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:54:00 PM
Andrea, my first reaction to this was to hang my head and weep. It touched me deeply; an amazing write. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:14:00 PM
Another great one, Andrea. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2014 10:26:00 AM
Oh my.......just that first line just grabbed me! Lovely , a gorgeous poem! Congrats to you, Andrea!
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:47:00 AM
Wow, Andrea.... awesome...pd
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:55:00 AM
Wow Andrea ,, glad to hv read this amazing one that i missed earlier,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:12:00 AM
Hi Andrea, you treat the longing for fading love with artistry; so sad the ending! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:07:00 AM
andrea, I wasn't sure who had written this poem, but I thought to myself "whoever it is has a real romantic soul"! I loved it from the first time I read it; it's very elegantly penned and has a very classical feel to it...I'm glad you used direct metaphor rather than simile in that opening line, it made all the difference (see my blog for what I had to say about the quality of the winners) congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 10/28/2010 5:47:00 AM
Glad to see you in #1. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:18:00 AM
Andrea... congrats for winning 1st spot in contest.....Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your 1st Place win in Paula's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2010 10:50:00 AM
An excellent write and you won with this wonderful write. Congrats. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:54:00 AM
Compliments to the judge and to you for this beautiful first place winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:02:00 AM
A beautiful poem. many congratulations dear friend on this big win.
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:53:00 AM
Hooray for you once again, Andrea!! You captured the mood with your bedeviled words!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:05:00 AM
Super duper congrats Andrea on your first place win in Paula's contest with this super duper write and entry luv.. enjoy the top spot for a top notch piece my friend with luv..
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