Of Poetry's Perfection

I’ve littered the page with alliteration
Marbled it with metaphor
Injected it with irony
Confined it in constrictive cadence
Slathered it with slithering syllabic silliness
Ravenously roamed the Rhyme Zone
Challenged the demons of “How many dot com”
Punctuated the un-punctuatable 
Said “the heck with spelchek”
Shed the shroud of sentient surveillance 

For my words are fed through
The shredders of sentiment
The chopping blades of “critique”
The swirling blades of trimmers
The plucky platitudes of pruners

And yet I write, compose, imbue
In unseen color distant words
Rough cut diamonds
Defying the cutters edges
Leaving a life unpolished
Unabashedly unashamed
Of the tarnished truths
That mar the purity
Of poetry’s perfection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Should be POTD, if there were any justice and no algorithm. Bravo, John!
Jones Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Unique and utterly beautiful
Slaughter Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:03 AM
I love reading your "rough cut diamonds", John. Kudos for this one.
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Spontaneity is the way to be! Enjoyed
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