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Of Poetry's Perfection

I’ve littered the page with alliteration Marbled it with metaphor Injected it with irony Confined it in constrictive cadence Slathered it with slithering syllabic silliness Ravenously roamed the Rhyme Zone Challenged the demons of “How many dot com” Punctuated the un-punctuatable Said “the heck with spelchek” Shed the shroud of sentient surveillance For my words are fed through The shredders of sentiment The chopping blades of “critique” The swirling blades of trimmers The plucky platitudes of pruners And yet I write, compose, imbue In unseen color distant words Rough cut diamonds Defying the cutters edges Leaving a life unpolished Unabashedly unashamed Of the tarnished truths That mar the purity Of poetry’s perfection

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Date: 7/14/2024 7:21:00 PM
Should be POTD, if there were any justice and no algorithm. Bravo, John!
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Date: 7/14/2024 11:45:00 AM
Unique and utterly beautiful
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Date: 7/14/2024 9:03:00 AM
I love reading your "rough cut diamonds", John. Kudos for this one.
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Date: 7/14/2024 7:45:00 AM
Quite a lot would be completely ruined if it were perfect I'm sure. It's the unknown quantity that is the maker of many things - somewhat unpredictable, but magic when it happens :) that's what I like to think I think anyway as I have a terrible fear of trying too hard and failing but adore when winging it works out :)
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Date: 7/14/2024 6:16:00 AM
Spontaneity is the way to be! Enjoyed
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Date: 7/14/2024 6:03:00 AM
Perfection is a relative bugger. Probably unattainable. Maybe that's a good thing
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John Lawless
Date: 7/14/2024 6:32:00 AM
alas Tom, I believe we all master the art of being perfectly imperfect....

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