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October vortexes summer scampered with steam auburn haze Keats poetized musings of darkness In windswept mardy asteroid blizzard unruffled booms merciless along October shore what creates glitter within probe craves from beyond& rose petals adorn floor loosed in whirling breeze & cotyledons perishing prophylactic's not persuasive to everything& pay tribute to petals precariousness during periods of upheaval discover snug scope within Equinoctial point where you settle &yet steadfast suppleness soften fruitfulness as diehard Poets &devotees of dimnesses deepening autumn's sublumic deepness Written: October 04, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 10/7/2022 8:37:00 PM
Though I too am not quite clear like Vijay about many of the masterly images used, I am sure it is a poem of great depth and its masterly execution is amply rewarded with your first rate placement in Brian's contest ! Congratulations, dear friend !
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Date: 10/5/2022 4:34:00 AM
Though I can't decipher everything--I know Brian will--- and obviously you have the mastery of this form and so many others my friend.
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Date: 10/4/2022 8:55:00 PM
Unusal form, but I like the openess. It allows the reader many opportunities to feel and express their own thoughts. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Bill
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