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November Snapshots

Cold huddled sparrows Wear that WTF look A squirrel drags his tail Through icy puddles A rat hunkers down Behind the barrels Worms wiggle dance In November’s no-fly zone A wet Owl whispers “Phew” School bus children Defy the rain drops A grouchy dog waits For the mailman An old woman’s scowl Frightens the wind

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Date: 11/9/2023 1:22:00 PM
A great "November Snapshots" write. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a great fall day writing away............
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John Lawless
Date: 11/9/2023 3:12:00 PM
thanks Paula, appreciated the visit.
Date: 11/9/2023 12:44:00 PM
Your vantage point is a look at November from the wrong side of the tracks. Beyond tree lined streets of old money houses. Not one fragrant and white washed where people whisper their gossip. I’d much prefer the barking dog and WTF look of huddled squirrels. Ovation to you, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/9/2023 3:10:00 PM
Well,Lin, it is a cold, rainy November in New England day and being a forever "city kid"....well ya see things most try to ignore. Thanks for stop[ing by

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