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No Soup For You

Sorry, yo There's no more soup for you You got here too late, the soup kitchen is closed after 2 Shouldna' been running your mouth, made you lose track of time Shouldna' been spewing the hate, but missing a meal ain't a crime Get your priorities in order, comrade, get with the fellowship program I'm afraid I had to color your language bad, here's a bowl of empty poetry slam So sorry, chump There's no soup for you Everybody done gone, everybody done ate Guess you still got to get your grub on, so put your plastic words on this empty paper plate Have a seat on the curb outside, hang your pen like a poetry mannequin Tomorrow is always a new day, unless yesterday is where you're living in Sorry to have to tell you this, but there's no more soup for you ... at least not today anyway And read the sign next time: Haters don't get any soup, they only get the hard shoo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/31/2017 5:57:00 PM
I am so happy that you like the poem I wrote. I wrote this poem for all poets that create poetry for us all. Your poem No Soup For You is aenjoyable poem to read. I can see myself in a line up for soup and when my turn.. I don't get any.Love to you as well.
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Date: 12/19/2016 12:23:00 AM
Haha, this reminds me of the soup nazi! Haha, Please sir, can I have some more? Peace bro!
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Date: 12/18/2016 6:36:00 PM
This is awesome, my friend. Simple enough for anyone to get it and so fun to read. Loved the mannequin line. It was so clever.
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Date: 12/18/2016 8:00:00 AM
Funny and thought provoking at the same time Freddie; reminds me of someone at work who wrote that on one of the warehouse boxes where I work; its another goodie with a good message!:)
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Date: 12/17/2016 4:25:00 PM
Hi Freddie, You've penned such powerful words. They packed a strong punch. Okay I see I got here too late. I will come back tomorrow. All kidding aside, I enjoyed the read my friend:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/17/2016 9:23:00 PM
No soup for you, Alexis. Heh heh heh. Glad you liked it, sista. Just warming up for some real slamming poetry in the future. So haters beware. Love your kind words. Much love to you and yours.
Date: 12/17/2016 7:41:00 AM
- .... more soup tomorrow, Freddie ? .... :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - Happy weekend :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/17/2016 12:47:00 PM
Hope so, Anne-Lise. Love and hugs to you too, dear.

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