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Night Rhythms

Wandering barefoot, whispering sweet sentiments of haunting pleasures. A touch that never phased me - a kiss from her heaven lips. Tangerine horizons, appeared like flames in brown eyes. Lovebirds gazed in awe, as her lust soaked my passion. Night rhythms sang to the stars. We lay until dawn, adrift in love's melodies, under moonlight's shroud. First blink to our morning skies was wrapped in her angel wings.
A Tanka is a type of short poem, similar to a Haiku, of 8th century Japanese origin which are often written to express self-reflection, love, or gratitude. A suitor would compile a Tanka and send it to a woman the following day after a date. The woman would then reply back in kind. The poems were like short, secret messages expressing gratitude, love, meaning, or desire, and often climaxed in a persuading message.

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Date: 12/4/2023 5:27:00 AM
The flow that these tanka poems adorn is just nothing less than heavenly.. I'm always so amazed by your artistic skills & the love-filled ambience that has been created here is truly so heartwarming.. Such saccharine wordplay here "A touch that never phased me -a kiss from her heaven lips", "Tangerine horizons,appeared like flames in brown eyes","First blink to our morning skies was wrapped in her angel wings" Ahh, these lines are absolutely breathtaking! Such magical descriptions you've woven!
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Date: 12/3/2023 6:29:00 PM
Lovely poetry! Enjoyed the beautiful imagery...
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Date: 12/3/2023 12:11:00 PM
I wanted to see how you do tanka. I recall another Asian form for love messages, but tanka is a another one I had not known about. I liked all of these. I just didn't understand "a touch that never passed me" the rest of these show the poet to be very affected by her passion.
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Silent One
Date: 12/3/2023 12:20:00 PM
Phased not passed.. I'm beginning to worry about you Andrea.... Thank for appreciating my tankas'
Date: 12/3/2023 10:28:00 AM
Well, S O, I'd say you did a great deal of justice to this tanka.
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Date: 12/3/2023 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this Tanka with us, Silent One, and for the informative note following your poetry. The YouTube was a cherry on top! Have a great week! Cheers, Bill
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:27:00 AM
Beautifully romantic, SO--adrift in love melodies, as you say. I hear the sound of love whispers.
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:19:00 AM
Indeed, a romantic piece, S.O. Very nice!
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:04:00 AM
What a heavenly and romantic string of Tankas! I appreciate the information about the Tanka form--it's one of my favorite forms. You created a truly magnificent love poem, soft and elegant with a hint of lover's passion. I especially liked: 'We lay until dawn, adrift in love's melodies, under moonlight's shroud.' Loved 'moonlight's shroud. wishing you a pleasant Sunday, Sara
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:15:00 AM
Yes, that is one definition of them. Thanks for sharing these with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:14:00 AM
Wow your tanka chain is so soulfully divine and romantic. I absolutely love the imagery too and how seamlessly your lines flow with one another. I especially love the first one. Sweet heavenly, wandering through a place that never phased sweet sentiments. And how love bird gazed in awe! I love love birds. They truly are adorable. And the ending sets the scene even more warm. You really are an expert in weaving love stories poetically. The kind of poem i wish i had written. Another fave. Love it
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