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Nicorates

upon meditation when outside suggested happenings it knew I would not like, sun-filled spring afternoons piled up like books stacked upon books, teetering, then after attempts, the room went nowhere, but, I may not have done – her voice shouted it both drew me in to another world yet threw me back to the one I had just left . . it was the briefest of journeys, it was the furthest of journeys when that afternoon introduced Nicorates to me; she who cried out this name cried out no more while I was left alone with Nicorates our fleeting glance . . lingering

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Date: 2/24/2024 4:23:00 PM
loved the juxtaposition "it was the briefest of journeys, it was the furthest of journeys" I assume 'Nicorates' is a reference to nicotine and cigarettes? Just thinking and mulling over the last few lines.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/25/2024 3:24:00 AM
what an interesting experience during that altered state. It would have given me pause, too.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 2/24/2024 11:48:00 PM
Nicorates was a name I heard while meditating, it was strangely shouted out as clear as anything but I was alone. A female voice shouted it, been wondering ever since who Nicorates is and who the woman was and why did I hear it during an altered state. Thanks for reading Sara

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