My Winter's Wishes
In the May-time of my life
time bloomed each day a prickly boll –
but I, like the softest cotton within such a sharp seed
swaddled in the purity of security
for what seemed like eternity
a lamb in His white embrace
especially when flocked in celebration;
the magic of a special Midnight Mass
when windows stained with the Way of Sorrows
awakened in the first inky inklings of the morrow
flaring with His passion.. though
the sun did doze with blazing swords reposed
not able to pierce the panes of pain – yet so
they blushed and bled on the eve of His birth – and oh..
aloft in the ethereal eyrie of the choir-loft
I felt close to God
my fourth-grade soprano in sing-song psalm
rose and fell from perfect O’s my mouth formed
notes as airy as bubbles cast from a round wand
light and bright.. and as devout
as winged cherubs flitting above the Nativity
yes.. they ascended from prayerful lips ..effortless..
I sang of an Angel heralding the birth of the newborn King
and for all the faithful to come adore Him
vocal music wafted in flight
lifted and lilted to balcony heights
turtle dove breaths filled with carols
fluttered from a pious voice box
a precious jewel box
rich with brilliant tone shimmer
aswirl like gold-flake in Advent candlelight
whirling down like a spiral of sound in wispy wreaths
as enchanting as the first falling snow’s pirouette
sweet and graceful and praiseful
sugar-dusting the Monseigneur
and pews filled with pairs of ears delighted
in the congregation below
my parents.. so proud.. turned to look up at me..
and as I basked in their Star of Bethlehem glow
indeed, I did feel close to God —
O
soul
when did I stop searching for you?
for in the heat of my summer daze
I grew wild a thorny vine
entangled in a picket-fence of events
ruinous to the morning glory of my rosy-rosary youth –
and by the height of August dank with humid cling
my very own hurricane gusted and busted in
flooding the faith from the parish of my mind;
the corrosion of saltwater corrupting
the holy water in my veins
and by the downfall of my Fall days - in a haze
of fog and battering waves -
October’s no-name nor'easter sank
a nameless boat broken in spirit
for I was no longer afloat
as a child of God ---
alas..
my once hallowed hull long since hollowed
humiliated by my lack of humility
now in the December-time of my life
hair as gray as the teary air
I drag a deadened heart beneath leaden skies
like the ghost of Jacob Marley drags his chains..
longing to find the blonde girl unfazed
the fleecy lamb in His white embrace
the little singer who sang prayerful songs;
the soprano I shed like a poppy-bloomed sheds its sepals...
I sit alone in the chill by my windowsill
the first season’s snow makes opaque the glass
my aged reflection pasted over - yet
enchanting a clean canvas to create a new portrait..
a flurry of frozen fallen stars stir
a blizzard of wishes;
to surrender
and understand
to apologize and
un-harm those I harmed
to glide as a star child like the lost Pleiad
searching for loved ones
on the right side of Heaven - but -
my most fervent winter’s wish - as vibrant
as a holly berry aflame on a snowy branch -
as hot as the candle’s fire flickering on my heart’s altar..
indeed, my most fervent winter's wish
is to feel close to God once again!
O God
humbly I pray
please don’t let my winter’s wishes
melt like snowflakes
on my trite yet contrite tongue
Susan Ashley
December 8, 2021
~ First Place ~
Premiere Contest: Inspirational Christian
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
~ Eighth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Winter Wishes
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
*boll: the rounded seed capsule of plants such as cotton or flax. Cotton bolls are sharp and likely to tear tender skin and injure hands
*eyrie: a nest; a high position or place
*the lost Pleiad: one of the seven sister stars in a celestial cluster called the Pleiades that is not easily visible to the unaided eye
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2021
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