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Mr L B Owen's Grocery Store

Small town grocery stores nowadays are very rare indeed, But in simpler times they supplied a family's every need. As a Hoosier lad, I worked in Mr L B Owen's Grocery Store, In charge of absolutely nothing, but was given every rotten chore! Poor Mr Owens was prone to go into a very ballistic state, At the least of my many blunders - he could really get irate! If I caused a crash of his neat display of vegetable soup, He'd scream, "Stack it again, you incompetent nincompoop!" It was a social club where neighbors met each Saturday night. Men in overalls, women in calico - what a varied sight! Ladies bartered with shrewd Mr Owens their eggs and butter, While seeking bargains midst the narrow aisles and clutter! Ah, but the sights, sounds and smells will e'er remain with me; The squeaky floor, the odor of onions, the fresh ground coffee, The butcher wielding his cleaver, slicing orders to please, Barrels of dill pickles, colorful fruits and wheels of cheese! There wasn't a PA system blaring, "Cleanup needed on aisle four!" Nor surly, gum-chewing cashiers - he would've shown them the door! Even in my stumbling, bumbling way I tried to be of service, But I suspect my feeble efforts made Mr Owens, very, very nervous! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 12:04:00 PM
this was a very touching piece, creative is an understatment, took me back in time. my brother worked in a store such as you wrote about, when he was around 14 in 1951, my family did their shopping there, you got what you wanted in this little basket then took it to the front. and meat you would tell him what you wanted and he shopped it up for you. thank you for commenting on Spring Time Follies
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Date: 3/29/2011 7:09:00 AM
Very creative write about a time that is gone but will it come back?..Those times when things seemed better to us in some ways..Some of the ways I do not desire like drawing water from the well, feeding the animals before day..Picking vegetables from the field as well as cotton...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your kind and encouraging comments on my work..I am glad that you got a chuckle for laughter is the best medicine..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:53:00 PM
Bob, the raccoon/kitten picture is the subject of Francine's contest. Check it out! Yes, I had received it in an email -- perhaps it came from you? I remember thinking at the time what a great topic it would make for a contest. Knowing your writing style, I think you might have fun with this contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:17:00 PM
How I missed reading your precious memories Bob. I could picture every scene in this vivid write of yours. Thank you for catching up on mine. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday and have a blessed weekend ;)
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:15:00 PM
i like the scene at mr. owen's store; full of life, robert! very kinetic...:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/27/2011 12:57:00 PM
What a pleasant past memories of the old golden world you have recollected of the Owen's store , Bob
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Date: 3/27/2011 11:02:00 AM
It must have been fun working for Mr. Owens in this wonderful old-time store, Bob. People didn't always have nightclubs or social clubs, so stores like this one became special gathering places. I'd like to give Owens a piece of my mind for calling you a nincompoop, though. Nothing could be further from the truth. Very cool poem filled with memories. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 8:15:00 AM
Excellent reminisce Bob of younger days and getting your feet wet working first time.. Mr. Owens sounds like a character alright... a wonderful read on a sunny but very cold Sunday luv.. my son and his wife will be home around 5 pm. est.. from warmth to cold luv..
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:30:00 AM
More beautiful nostalgia, Sarge. Excellent piece. Pleasant memories. Ralphie.
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:33:00 AM
Loved this little story Robert. Isn't nincompoop a lovely word. I love your stories to rhyme, they are simply fantastic. Have a lovely Sunday.....:) mega smiles
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Date: 3/26/2011 9:17:00 PM
My uncle Paul worked in a store like this. He would always slip us a bit of sweets. Nice and nostalgic. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/26/2011 7:59:00 PM
adorable story
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