Get Your Premium Membership

Move To the Mainland

Disembarkment hearkened a largely unknown universe Melbourne's sky lifting grid hidden partially Behind rows of giraffe laughing palm trees He dinged his car in the line to leave the car park Home now to brazen 20 year olds, brought both cars Had booked accommodation in suburb 5 miles north She was staggered by intensity of Tuesday morning city Swarming people made beelines to their business day Several close encounters with trams saw riled passengers Drastic traffic presented fresh dilemma, stitched thick Mounting queues in right turn lanes, a phenomena unfamiliar Billboards blasted big messages, brothels among them Heavy clusters of vehicles became the pair's detriment Hives of continued light intersections caused separation Having easy communication not possible without mobiles Deviations from course happened dozens of times Midday passed in a haze of befuddled frustration Bemoaned youth of 2000 had no GPS to guide their ways! Satiated by their eventual arrival at accommodation Sun setting on a scary first day, unwittingly touring Seventeen suburbs of mayhem monstrosity Melbourne! For: All In A Day Poem Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula 27th August 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/17/2020 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sigrid, I get riled in traffic many times too!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2020 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Sigrid, for your great win in this contest!! A few-minutes high drama!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2020 5:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Sigrid :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2020 9:34:00 PM
We'll done capturing the angst of city traffic, Sigrid. What a day that must have been, now immortalized in poetry! Congratulations, my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2020 8:52:00 PM
The petulance of urbanized life, my dear Sigrid, for your enlightenment exposed the instilled silence of the whines of the simple town folks! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
Login to Reply
Ermine Avatar
Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/18/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thank you for hosting it, William. Good to get memories out on the page every so often..!
Date: 8/26/2020 8:44:00 PM
Aloha, Sigrid, --can soupmail me?
Login to Reply
Ermine Avatar
Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/26/2020 10:56:00 PM
Okay! Sorry!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things