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This rope I do not remember where is starts or ends I walk barefoot below it's dark above a star This rope no yellow brick road no company I walk cold hands my heart thumps This rope is it an umbilical cord? I walk between life and death eternally This rope this Möbius strip I walk eternally *** September 14, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/5/2017 1:41:00 PM

A very creative poem, Darren. I love learning new things ... this Mobius strip is something that tingled my ears. Ty for the increase in knowledge you provided. This alone made this poem worthwhile. A very fine write, my friend. Love and peace always.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 9/20/2017 2:37:00 PM

The Mobius strip fascinates me as well Darren. I read your link. Definitely given me a new dimension (?). // Barry.

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Barry :)

Darren White

Date: 9/16/2017 2:36:00 AM

Instead of thanking you individually, I'll just insert here an interesting link about the Mobius Strip, seen from a very different, more philosophical point of view: http://taomath.org/2016/03/the-deep-symbolism-of-the-mobius-strip/ Enjoy :) And remember: it is a POEM, I am not talking about ME!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/15/2017 8:53:00 AM

I love the way this one crawls into the psyche Darren, excellent pen xomo!

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:09:00 AM

Yeah mo :) Thanks my friend.

Jean Murray

Date: 9/14/2017 6:19:00 PM

A rope can be used to hang oneself or save one from a fatal fall. The midwife in me hopes it is an umbilical cord Darren.

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:09:00 AM

It's a poem written around the Mobius Strip, not a personal experience :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/14/2017 2:32:00 PM

What is your mobiles strip and why can't you leave it? I had to look it up and my brain started screaming and ran away. Sorry Darren I am not very scientific.

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:08:00 AM

It's a fun thing Patricia

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/14/2017 7:21:00 AM

I agree with Agnes, this has an anxious quality to it, something feels out of place ~ not your words but your projection of deathly images.

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Phil :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/14/2017 7:01:00 AM

Interesting poem, Darren. It has a disconcerting feel to it, nicely done.

Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 6:05:00 AM

Thanks Agnes