Mill Wheel

The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring.
Covered in ice from the frigid Winter freeze,
no production until the ivory dove does sing.
The town wondered what nature would bring, 
so no one walked around with reposed ease. 

The streamlet was frozen and along the shore
they found messages in bottles from the past. 
Some had never seen anything like this before.
Whispers ran through the town from door to door, 
and the meanings of these messages were asked. 

No one spoke truth about these strange words, 
they all denied knowing about them in fear.
Shaken up by this calamity the town was stirred,
they were told their messages would be unheard. 
Just then a loud noise approached from near. 

Ice melts, revealing secrets- wheel creaks
though the upcoming Spring hadn’t yet arrived.
Everyone stops in silence and no one speaks, 
the snow stops falling and the ivory dove shrieks-
Lightning strikes the Mill wheel, and no one survived.




One, nine, sixteen v3.0 Poetry Contest
July 20, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Laura. Many congrats. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Oh gosh! Didn't see that coming! Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed.
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Thanks for entering my humble contest, Laura, with your cryptic piece, enjoyed! Viv x
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 8:13 AM
I love how this contest took the poet to different ideas. yours is so smooth and descriptive, I really enjoyed it and could see this placed high on the winners list.
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