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Midnight Muse

Sometimes in the night she creeps into my bed, Her unsuspecting target is my head. I lie awake and listen to her words, So often they ring true and new And full of promise. Sometimes her mind will change And I must ponder her meaning. Never bold and brash and angry But ever thoughtful, Sowing seeds that may prove fruitful, Or will they wither and be dead By morning light ? In deepest sleep perhaps, So many silent nights go by Without her coming in the darkness. Restive, I enjoy her welcome touch, Her words will echo in my head, Tumbling and turning, round and round, Then in excited fever, as in a trance, I reach out for my scribbling pad. Her words secured, I now relax, My mind once more returned To fitful dreaming. My wife, long suffering, now wide awake And restless in her marital bed, Asking herself "For goodness sake, Why did I a poet wed ?"

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Date: 2/17/2023 5:34:00 AM
You are very creative, if you are interested in reading your poems aloud on a small on line poetry cafe, I host one once a month, you are most welcome to join us, if you wish to join, please email me at mysticrosedorje@gmail.com and I will place you in my contact list, thanks
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/17/2023 8:25:00 AM
Many thanks for this kind invitation but unfortunately I must decline as I do not have an appropriate speaking voice for this kind of thing. Thanks for the thought and for your kind comment. Peter.
Date: 6/16/2019 9:05:00 PM
Ahhh....I remember these nights when my muse visited. Wakes you straight out of bed and you have to write it down so you don't forget. Loved your poem Peter! Blessings, Susan
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/17/2023 8:22:00 AM
Sorry about this belated response to your very kind comment Susan. Much appreciated. Peter
Date: 3/12/2018 7:14:00 PM
I miss her nightly visits Peter. I have not heard her whispers in a couple years now. Now every poem is forced and no longer feel like a part of me. Your poem is wonderful and I couldn't help but smile at your ending. :•)
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/17/2023 8:19:00 AM
Sorry for this belated reply to your kind comment. The ending was true to life and from the heart.
Date: 12/10/2017 6:17:00 PM
A wonderful and inspired write Peter. This is an apt description of the poetic process. Muse doesn't take inconveniences, like sleeping, showering, food shopping or working into account :) We just do our best to keep up with her when she calls.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/17/2023 8:17:00 AM
It seems a common problem. Insomnia and poetic inspiration- hand in hand perhaps ?
Date: 11/20/2017 1:05:00 PM
oops you too? At the most awkward moments she rolls in from God knows where to fever my brain with words of incense. Brguiling m with tales from many spaces. Excellent description Peter.
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Date: 11/17/2017 12:01:00 PM
I know exactly what you mean Peter, sometimes my muse will poke me in the middle of the night and I have to get up and write, irritating my wife's sleep. Well done, a write most poets will heartily agree with!
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Peter Rees
Date: 11/17/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you John. It's a hard life, eh?

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