Mercurys Dream

Falling riffs like spangled gold,
And sounding drums seem to explode
A surge of tapping, dancing feet,
The piano’s notes, mon coeur entreat.
Cherie amour the air is ''sweet'', so silver laced,
Each face reflects another’s shine
As endeavours fruit is taken in
Like fragrant mellow wine.


© Joe Maverick 03-08-2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Duncan Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 3:48 AM
Very very nice :)
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April 25, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Hello, Joe.. thank you very much for honoring my poem... it really made my day... How are you?? how have you been.. really I at times like this I miss you, and your inspiring friendship..I'll never forget the time you mailed me and told me how i encouraged you one time when you where feeling down.. well i'm the one feeling down now.. and your comments mean much to me.. always..pd
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April 22, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Bon, Monsieur...vous etes comme Arc de Triomphe vers la poesie.:) Another wonder written by Joe Maverick, cheers to you! Best wishes, love, Mikki
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March 29, 2011 at 3:59 AM
Wow! What a colorful picture you paint, Joe with this sensational piece. Many congrats on this fine feature of the week. Elaine
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March 28, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, thanks for sharing with us, Joe
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March 28, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Joe. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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March 12, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Congrtas Joe. thanks for ur comments abt my poem. your right, we are indeed subjected to one god, i wont take it as curse or in negative way,mab be m blessed with special quality not all are intutive.. thanx. good luck. pooja mitter
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Joe. Love Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Joe. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 1:35 PM
I like the dance in this one - full of image and flavor. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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January 10, 2011 at 11:59 AM
A great choice by this site for poems of the week. This has great descriptiveness and suitable rhyming. Overall, a fine presentation.
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January 9, 2011 at 11:31 PM
This is so pretty and flowing, Joe. I really like this one! Luv, Andrea
Thomer Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:25 PM
this was a beautiful piece. congratulations on your feature this week. --Madison
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January 9, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv my friend...
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August 12, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Thanks for your commets on my works...keep sharing with us here.
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August 6, 2010 at 2:09 PM
poem is exceptionally flowing like your mellow wine. Enjoyed!
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