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Written: February 25, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A sun sets in the west; oh, boy, he has gone to rest, Mama grips her breast in an apocalyptic pain quest. Each diaphanous creature feeds on crimson land, Grass on city streets—an effusive sight as we stand. After the juice ran out, the town turned silent, Silence, a somber speech—no swoon is violent. Yet, something has splashed up on the beach, A man who is still alive but too flabby to reach. After millennia, a desultory one can fathom, The chimera, an epiphany of root phantom. Humanity perished—ephemeral rapt by the void, Lambent nature likes a vacuum, such a devoid. Earth purged, and no desuetude of amort era, Ideal and dwarf beings graze on reddish terra. Lawns on sidewalks are an emollient reminder, A vibrant town, now conflate on a flow grinder. Washed up ashore, just a transient figure, In a post-man scene—an evanescent creature. His arrival bestows a nostalgic gaze on the past, A calyx relic from a world that couldn't last. The town remains quiet—a haunting hush, As nature reclaims what was once lush. But a man on shore is a relic of our fate, A transient being left to contemplate. In a post-man script, beshrew a world once alive, But now, it's just a memory, a fading strive. The man on the beach, a symbol of our demise, He gazes at the sky with weary eyes. Apocalyptic distress engulfs us all, As we witness the closing, the final fall. But amidst the chaos, a sparkle of hope, In the transient nature of humanity's scope. Grass that grows on city streets is a resilient sign, Cynosure nature prevails, even in mankind's decline. Cities may be quiet, but echoes of our past remain, Whispers of the wind and the rhythm of the rain.

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Date: 3/19/2024 1:43:00 PM
Another fabulous poem win! Congratulations Sotto!
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Date: 3/19/2024 12:30:00 PM
- An excellent poem, Las :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/19/2024 11:49:00 AM
WoW Las - Deep purple never sounded so good !! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:59:00 AM
SP….you are a reflection of PS! It does seem to some of us that our too soon extinction is a fait accompli. There’s always warning signs, but what will it take to really change the direction we’re headed? It’s scary stuff, but are we just alarmists? I don’t think the academics are laughing.
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:34:00 AM
A magnificent video you chose--and an equally magnificent write that illustrates your theme, my friend. Much enjoyed the poetic journey through your creativity, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:43:00 PM
This poem enveloped me with visions of the future. I remain concerned with the man washed to shore. Will he die, or will he survive? I liked this excellent poem.
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:26:00 PM
This should be a short film what a great write! I love how you put this together and it has a deeply thought provoking subject! My favorite lines are the last stanza as it so beautifully wraps the piece up like a bow! "Grass that grows on city streets is a resilient sign, Cynosure nature prevails, even in mankind's decline. Cities may be quiet, but echoes of our past remain, Whispers of the wind and the rhythm of the rain."
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Date: 3/19/2024 2:26:00 PM
Back to say Congratulations on your win!
Date: 2/25/2024 12:13:00 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed your wonderful Rhyme write/story with a great ending. Love the line, "Apocalyptic distress engulfs us all." Have a wonderful day/week writing away............
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:01:00 AM
The video was thought-provoking, Sotto Poet, as was your poem. Nature indeed, will survive, man will no longer be ... on this earth we call home. I especially like your last verse, and the repetitive phrase, "Grass on city streets". Powerful images of the end of mankind. Thanks for sharing your mindful poetry with us, my dear friend. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:37:00 AM
Deep Purple were a great band.. Like the song, your poem paints a vivid and poignant picture of a post-apocalyptic world, where nature and humanity collide in a hauntingly beautiful landscape of despair and resilience.. It offers a compelling meditation on the fragility of life and the resilience of nature in the face of adversity. It invites readers to contemplate the fleeting nature of human existence and the enduring power of hope amidst chaos and despair..
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:56:00 AM
dear Sotto--your poem was a deep and evocative read. You captured apocalyptic times magnificently with your imagery and rhymed lines. As I read your words, I actually felt like I was living in a post-apocalyptic world (which is one of my concerns given the nature of mankind in today's world) Despite the apocalypse, hope prevails silently and softly in the rhythm of the rain. The last verse gave me hope in both man's and nature's resilience. A fabulous poem. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara PS the video was a perfect match.
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
Dr sotto, this is brilliant and so well written. In a poem that is writren inspired by a song its amazing and impressive how you’ve used alliterations and such descriptive diction. In such a heartfelt and moving manner. I especially loved the lines “ Silence, a somber speech—no swoon is violent. Yet, something has splashed up on the beach, A man who is still alive but too flabby to reach.“ how deep is that? And flows in such eloquence! “ that ending is soulful! Makes this another poem worth Fav
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