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Sorry this is so long while the topic is totally autobiographical. It's the only way that came to me to do this form! Here is description of Lu Loo's form:

5 rhyming stanzas- 10 lines per stanza

Rhyme Scheme:
Stanza 1 - a x 10
Stanza 2 - b x 10
Stanza 3 - c x 10
Stanza 4 - d x 10
Stanza 5 – aabbccddee (ee- 2 extra rhyming lines of your choice)

My first ten years (or childhood), I'd say were pretty great. although my confidence could easily deflate. To be a teen - For this I could not wait! I wanted a nice boyfriend and loved that first big date! I learned a lot, like how to watch my weight. On reaching age 18, I then wiped clean my slate, for I was bound for college and did not hesitate. I left my home and childhood behind; I left my state. In less than two more years, I was married to my mate. Two children I would give him well before age twenty-eight. College I had finished, and I had a nice job too once my first ten years of adulthood were all through. We moved away when hubbie got a job that was brand new. In California we wound up. I never had a clue of all the different kinds of things I was soon to do. The five years there were heaven, and little did I rue. I learned to teach aerobics and rarely was I blue. Boating trips we took back then, more than just a few. There were thrift shopping and movies, and quickly the time flew as money for a house we were able to accrue. Back we went to our home state, where my husband Joe built the house where we still live (some thirty years ago)! In decade three of my adulthood, needing lots of dough because of mortgage payments, I got a new job, so I worked a lot of hours. Goodbye to that rainbow of life near San Francisco. We live closer now to Idaho! My husband's hard work and my own were paying off although hubbie had a breakdown, and that brought us lots of woe, but I saw my two kids, older now, into adulthood grow. Decade 4 of my adulthood started pretty bright. This was when I realized that poems I could write. My daughter had her babies, which brought me much delight, but the year 2008 sure gave us all a fright! I would write my poetry for hours into night. Hubbie changed his occupation; things turned out all right. Issues with my neck and shoulder I would have to fight. Stress came more, and like my spouse, I also felt its bite because for a few years, our money got quite tight. Yet through it all, I had great friends to make my burdens light. Phase five I am in now; I'd have never guessed my fate, yet I feel so happy for the things I can create. My life and times through poetry I often can review, and I'm having faith in things I hope will help my health renew. I love the many little things that make my spirit glow, and there are other things that I've been learning to let go. Achievements in my writing have just been out of sight! What a way to go if I'm heading to my twilight. I hope that up to phase 8 of adulthood I may see and (if I get to go that far) that I'll do it healthily. November 6, 2019 for Lu Loo's LUDix-Rym Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/18/2019 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Andrea. Bravo. This form is a huge accomplishment.
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Date: 11/18/2019 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, dear poet Andrea! <3 Kim
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Date: 11/10/2019 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea - a great write for POTD - a wonderful honor - almost as long as mine! Congrats, on your winning placement also my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/9/2019 8:39:00 AM
Damn that is long.... great bio though.. Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 11/9/2019 8:16:00 AM
Wow. This is awesome. I wouldn't have ever thought of it. I loved learning more about you and your life. Bless you, dear friend, Gina
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Date: 11/9/2019 6:05:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent, and exposing your life through this poetic autobiography. God bless you.
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations on both counts POTD & in Laura's contest. Hugs
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:05:00 PM
A journey through life with more to come..Congrats on POTD Andrea
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:59:00 PM
Interesting to read a summary of your life. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:10:00 PM
Andrea, a brilliant write. So well expressed. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 11/8/2019 4:17:00 PM
So many moments of your life, you have so poetically expressed here. It is crystal clear, that your words would appear, here among so many talented poets and poetess. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. On your win as well. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/8/2019 3:14:00 PM
wow Andrea you certainly nailed the contest with a top spot and POTD, I have to admit my muse found this far too much of a challenge to even try for the contest! Bravo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:41:00 PM
- Congratulations with your great story (p.o.t.d.), Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:44:00 PM
+ congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :)
Date: 11/8/2019 1:05:00 PM
For such a somber cool bio, it sure made chuckle a lot, Andrea. Very heartwarming and heartfelt musings ... thank you for sharing. And kudos for POTD. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 11/8/2019 12:56:00 PM
Wow Andrea, your life is eloquently expressed in this poem. Congratulations on your deserving POTD! xxoo
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Date: 11/8/2019 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. You told the story of the years beautiful. Great write.....
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Date: 11/8/2019 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 11/8/2019 11:48:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest and on your POTD with this wonderful write. Enjoy the honor!
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:53:00 AM
Love Health and Prosperity to YOU and YOURS...Congratulations Andrea on POTD
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:44:00 AM
Hey, Andrea! Go for Phase 9 and 10, and …! And here's a shout-out for a well-deserved POTD. Cheers! :) gw
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:36:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You did an amazing job with this contest. Nice rhymes and content. It was as though I was reading a snippet of your life story/ autobiography. I really enjoyed this, thanks. Congratulations on your placement in the contest and for getting the poem of the day. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:16:00 AM
I knew you would be at the top! I have been too busy to construct one of these. A magnanimous Congratulations to you! Masterfully done! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 11/8/2019 7:14:00 AM
Wow! A rich life indeed! Great write Andrea, congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your life story, Andrea, thank you for sharing it. Congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:25:00 AM
WoW!...quite the accomplishment and story my friend...Congrats! on POTD!! Andrea...^WW^ :o)
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