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LOVE STORY - Poetry Contest

My love, you roped all the stars for me My life you held in your hands As children we swam in cold blue seas Sculpting castles in warm wet sands My fairy tale prince in childhood dreams Certain that I’d marry you You garnered my sun and my moon beams Time passed, my love only grew Entrusting whispered secrets to keep Guarding hopes and dreams with care Twin souls in love, impassioned and deep No doubts you’d always be there Alas forever, was meant to be Three days before we were wed A fool and drink took your life from me I wanted to die instead Such pain I’d never known in my life My soul surely broke in two My heart was pierced with grief’s jagged knife The seam of my life unglued My heart, my soul, I’ll miss you forever I feel you though I can’t see My tears will fall 'til we’re together Without you I'm half of me. Written for LOVE STORY - Poetry Contest Sponsored by SILENT ONE 11/3/2017

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Date: 11/6/2017 12:09:00 PM
Judy, this is such a beautiful and sad love story. Your first place was well deserved. I enjoyed reading it. John
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Judith S
Date: 11/6/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you John for your kind comments. i appreciate you taking time to read :) Best, Judy
Date: 11/6/2017 5:44:00 AM
This is such a poignant write Judith. I can see Congratulations are in order on this very sensitive write....Maria
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Judith S
Date: 11/6/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Maria. As always, I appreciate you reading and commenting. Best, Judy
Date: 11/5/2017 9:02:00 AM
Judith, such a beautifully written tragic love story. Your poem unfolds with smooth rhythm, lovely rhyme and captivating content. Fantastic romantic imagery and poetic expression throughout. Excellent and enjoyed... Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!!
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Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 10:12:00 AM
Dear Susan ... I always appreciate your lovely comments. Thank you for always taking the time to read !!! Best, Judy
Date: 11/5/2017 8:35:00 AM
Very powerful and heartfelt write. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Line! Appreciate you reading! Best, Judy
Date: 11/5/2017 6:55:00 AM
This one was really really sad... How sad when love is lost in such a tragic way.. Beautiful poetry Judith.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One!!! Your kind comments are always so inspirational to me! I very much appreciate the honor of a winning spot in your contest kind sir!!! Best, Judy
Date: 11/4/2017 5:06:00 PM
Very moving write, Judy, this should do well Silent likes these kind of writes!
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Judith S
Date: 11/4/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thank you John Hamilton. Very kind of you :). Best, Judy
Date: 11/4/2017 7:43:00 AM
A moving tale of love, Judith--best for a win!
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Judith S
Date: 11/4/2017 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Vijay !!
Date: 11/3/2017 10:47:00 PM
So touching and real, teardrops will fall with a read, nicely and efficiently captured, my kindest regards. xx
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Judith S
Date: 11/4/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments RM. Appreciate you stopping by to read.