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Love Is a Garden

An apple a day keeps the doctor away; But hugs are the best for your heart. They say all is fair in love and in war, But fair can keep lovers apart. Normal’s a setting on washing machines, But love is extraordinaire. So don’t let the sun set on anger or spite; Apologize gently, with care. “It ain’t broke, don’t fix it” might go for a car, But love is an ongoing work. Measure twice, cut once, take care what you say, ‘Cuz love doesn’t suffer a jerk. Culture’s what grows in the back of the fridge; For love, you must cultivate. Absence, they say, makes the heart grow fonder, But presence is truly what sates. Some idiot thought fear was better than love; For that, there’s derisive laughter. They say that one’s pride comes before the big fall, But lawyers come shortly thereafter. A horse led to water can’t be made to drink, But roses can go a long way. “You reap what you sow” should give one pause to think, Attend to your love every day! Some say love’s euphoric, it intoxicates, But a love that is real, it seems, Is a garden that’s tended to every day, Not some blissful escape of your dreams. ----------
FIRST PLACE WINNER For the "G - Give me a new poem- any form -" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France On the theme of 1. love Written 02/26/2022

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Date: 3/14/2022 3:38:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/14/2022 3:49:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, that was a fun one!
Date: 3/4/2022 1:01:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest with your beautiful poem ~Constance
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/14/2022 3:50:00 AM
Thanks, Constance - I enjoyed trying to work on a Grook
Date: 3/2/2022 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Your humorous analogies delightful! :)Paulette
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Date: 3/2/2022 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations, witty and thoughtful.
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Date: 2/27/2022 1:38:00 AM
Witty and wise words, Jeff:)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/27/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Date: 2/26/2022 5:02:00 PM
Wonderful love poem, Jeff. Like a garden, it takes a lifetime of loving care to do it right. Have a great day! Bill
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/26/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thanks, Bill, that was a fun one!
Date: 2/26/2022 10:04:00 AM
Exceptional quatrains, Jeff, and each one will stand alone as a very well-written Grook. You've outdone yourself. Can I borrow one of them for the contest? Actually, I refurbished an old Gazhal.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/1/2022 7:06:00 PM
Yes, I'm familiar with that sickening feeling. Sadly, there are probably other errors that have gone undetected, but the ones that pop out after the poem has been up for a while are indeed embarrassing.!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/26/2022 12:45:00 PM
Truthfully, Jeff, I frequently go back and change a word or two or the punctuation. I read my poems several times and seldom get them right, so I'm continually improving on them. That's a good thing, I think. And, I must add, I'm horrified when I find a grammatical error I had overlooked and see that several people have read the piece. It's shattering!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/26/2022 10:28:00 AM
So, how often do you go back and tweak an old one? Sometimes the ink isn't even dry yet. I think I read someone to say, "I spent half a day and removed a comma, and another half a day and added it back!"
Date: 2/26/2022 7:54:00 AM
This is a delightful read; I really enjoyed your wit and way with words. Thank you for your visit.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/26/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Faye, have a blessed day!

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