Love At First Sight-A Quintile

We had
met and conversed,
a rapport on first sight-
a chance meeting to a life's time
delight
that
Summer
evening silken,
long..an encounter of
initiations together
explored
as
Desire
welled within-
words became a promise
so sublime,to love now and for
all time.

A quintile is a poem of linked American cinquains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 11/10/2020 9:51:00 PM
Love at first sight and only once in life .. I just wish I could explain it. I had that with my last husband and no one can replace.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/10/2020 10:07:00 PM
Happily Eve,many decades later I was gifted to record my feelings in our artform.
Date: 1/16/2020 5:11:00 PM
Brian, I love this poem, the first time I met my husband to be I fell in love and he did too, and we both knew it was forever "it was love at first sigh", sadly he has left for Heaven but I still feel the love ~
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Brian Strand
Date: 1/17/2020 2:49:00 AM
Poetry is indeed at its best Constance when reality is to the fore.Cheers.
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