Lint's Aura

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AUDIO: Danse Macabre by Busy Strings. Lint's Aura Dignity gliding, Resplendent in red was I, Generous eyes felt, Occurrences display me, Stellar launched my existence. Wardrobe visit hung, Collection of new threads fills, Close-knit paradigm, Fussy fingers orbit me, Small room phases a small box. Reduced unstructured, Yond pilfered vigor stills I, Tattered wisps attend, Cleavage currents my image, Flew with the best ere sole flight. 2022 June 03 *7th Place* A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 June 06 *HMS: 5,7,5,7,7 syllables per x 3 stanzas

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2022 8:27:00 AM

Wow, William, A great lot of effort and attention to detail you put to create these Brilliant Tankas of excellent caliber. In actuality, they are linked in order to represent a facet of the interaction between our ego and the need to exhibit a distinctive and valued personality.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/4/2022 10:21:00 AM

A GREAT underlying observation, Lasaad, of what you have perceptively brought out into the open, most remarkably my friend -- CHEERS! Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2022 5:20:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. Not sure what it is about but creative work anyway. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/4/2022 10:12:00 AM

Unlike a well-kept wedding dress, it's the tests and trials of worn downed years when an attic box opens, exposing a once fine fabric now turned to bits, ups in the air. 'Tis meant for another contest, but I gave Brian's a go since he like Tankas. 'Twas an inspiring venture to your sight and a spark of mines my friend, Aloha~William

David Mchattie

Date: 6/3/2022 9:07:00 PM

Lovely piece of music. I'm trying to attach an audio to a poem. It's an mp3 at 2.6MB but an error page comes up. Any help would be appreciated.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/3/2022 10:05:00 PM

Hi, David! You're within the required parameters lest your file where your music is located may be corrupt and/or, unacceptable. Try the "Compress ..." option offered under "Attach Audio ...", if you haven't done so, albeit, on the surface, all seems compliant. Best to you my friend, Aloha~William