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* Dedicated to my sister, Terrilynn Dubreuil, who inspires me daily ... while she works mostly in pastels of late, (a member of the National Pastel Society), she is also quite good with watercolor and oils, and this is a personal favorite. *

   time …

drips as color, inked and puddled
minutes like sable bristles, bound
laying down the hours as fading bands of value
what are the shades of a life - of a person?
how do aim and purpose and fallibility
influence what's placed on actuality's canvas?
instance and interval are the palette
but passion and purpose are the pigments
desire, the light that affects hue
method and realization, the design
imagination supplying shape and aspect
and effort, the hand that steadies the tools
we each paint our own feral portrait - abstract or photo-realistic
impressionistic or conceptual, surreal or minimalist
artists, ALL, in command of the grandest composition
breathe deep, life, and exhale your purest inspiration
wield the brush of ages in your grasp, focused by intent
consider your medium, and stain the parchment as no other
move the paint - daub the paper with your dreams
baptized in perspective, fresh and joyous and dazzling
worthy of matting and framing, and adorning the halls ...

   of Eternity






~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Strand Choice N, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 9th Place ~  in the "Paint Movers" Poetry Contest, Anthony Slausen, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2020 11:29:00 AM
What a talented family you hail from, Bard! Makes me wonder what your parents did to inspire you towards artistic pursuits... anyway I love your breadth of poetic expression; here merging philosophical musings with artistic allegories and watercolor impressions. Great ending lines. Love the painting, too - thanks for sharing this ~ John
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:54:00 PM
Absolutely marvelous metaphors, Greg! So movingly descriptive. CONGRATS! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/24/2018 12:08:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Janice, thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 10/18/2018 7:20:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your sister, Greg, and so beautifully written with fine imagery and exquisite metaphors! Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/24/2018 12:08:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much, Sandra, that's very sweet ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/17/2018 6:50:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/17/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! :-)
Date: 6/15/2018 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this people poem! As always, much wisdom here :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/15/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Susan, I greatly appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 6/11/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win as usual.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/15/2018 6:54:00 PM
Very kind of you, Subimal, thank you! :-)
Date: 6/10/2018 4:59:00 PM
Excellent write, Greg :) Congratulations on a very well deserved win... Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/15/2018 6:53:00 PM
Many thanks, Eve - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 6/10/2018 12:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in "People" contest, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/15/2018 6:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/11/2018 11:47:00 AM
You are sooooo creative!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/12/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/10/2018 11:08:00 PM
Masterpiece indeed. Superbly done, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line - I greatly appreciate it, Dear Friend! :-) <3

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