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Just Around the Corner

Beginning changes A spectacular fall farewell Fade to brilliant

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/25/2009 6:33:00 PM

lyrical! beautiful! BG!

Date: 8/20/2009 4:16:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this concise poem. I like the use of alliteration. Nice one! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 8/18/2009 11:52:00 AM

Lovely imagery in this beautiful Haiku Barbara>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2009 8:57:00 AM

Beautifully written. I can see the leaves beginning to change colors or the autumn of our lives. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/18/2009 8:19:00 AM

Lovely......brilliant in color and change!! ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

Date: 8/18/2009 7:52:00 AM

Favorite part of the year.. Fall.... Nice write Barbara....:JP]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2009 7:04:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Barbara. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/18/2009 4:47:00 AM

awesomazing--charma:)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/18/2009 4:29:00 AM

Fade to brilliant..nicely done.

Brian Strand

Date: 8/18/2009 2:14:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today BG.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2009 11:05:00 PM

Yes, the spectacular fall is just around the corner now. Are you still planning to visit the Northeast to see the foliage change colors. Indeed, they can seem so brilliant -- but they reach their height of beauty just before they tumble to the ground. Great haiku, Barbara. Glad to see you posting again! Love, Carolyn