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To me, yea, Iris is invisible, the scent of yours all pervading. Behold your face all-rich, When I close my eyes. Wordsworth's daffodils to me, Membrane of the eyes, that gives light to me, Light that misleads the morn. You are the genus iris, with sword-shaped leaves, Showy colored flowers, displaying rainbow colors. Your eyes green and deep, Deeper than the depth, Stilled waters at even, those eyes, break of the day. I see a heart full of love, with the gentleness of a dove. Feel in her eyes March, September in her heart. Dr. Ram Mehta ========================= Tenth place win in The poem was written on June 29, 2010 Contest: Why Oh Why by The Rambling Poet, Constance

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Date: 10/30/2010 5:23:00 PM
rich, full, tantelizing (4th verse line 3 perhaps "at eve"?) congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:32:00 PM
This is quite lovely. Congratulations on getting a win with this delicate piece.
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:25:00 PM
congrats on your win Dr. Ram with this lovely entry
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:10:00 AM
Many congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:21:00 AM
Dr. Ram congratulations on your fine win in the contest ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congrats, Dr Ram. Well deserved. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a super weekend. Ralph
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Ram, on your placement in my contest, Why Oh Why~~
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:00:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry.. enjoy another victorious moment my friend this happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Dr. Ram..Beautiful and a delight to read. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:56:00 PM
I see I had seen this one before. Again, I was taken by the last two stanzas! Beautiful lines in this one. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:13:00 PM
A beautiful poem Dr. Mehta. Many congratulations for this one.
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Date: 7/3/2010 8:05:00 PM
enjoyed!
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:33:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words about my writing. I find yours very intriguing. Something that must be read more than once. I do enjoy it. it seems to have a depth to it that I find soft and beautiful.
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:14:00 AM
Enjoyed your write Dr. Ram! And thank you for your kind comments...Gert
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:26:00 PM
Very descriptive and colorful write. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my latest. Caroline.
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:18:00 PM
I like this one just as much. I really loved how you ended this with eyes of March and September in her heart. My flower poem was about a September heart!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:10:00 PM
One of those poems that keeps the reader enchanted. I was sold with the first verse and finished disappointed...I so did not want your poem to end. It is a magnificent work, one I would be proud to have written. But, since you are the fortunate on to produce this marvel, I salute your poem and talent.
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:34:00 PM
Sweet aromatic words Dr. Ram.. good luck in the contest with this wonderful rendition of the Iris flower... a delight to read.. u can feel the life breath of this beauty.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...
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