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In marked territory

When my inkless isles become drenched with icy wintergreen embers of apologetic auroras ~ and l i f e loses its lyrics in lilith's labyrinth, this soul orchestrating in origami riddles unfurls a cerise sanctuary ~ where the calligraphic signatures of serenity, no longer lurk in my hand-sketched alphabets... Hunted by l i g h t and sheltered by demons, can a strawberry sapling blossom into a bioluminescent beacon, bleached by beliefs ~ along barnacles that hide cardamom clusters in the canopy of confused clairvoyance? Why do I feel paralysed as those spectral lilies, shapeshifting in solemn shark songs, when the sorceress in me should have been paragliding with p a i n, within a parachute of pearls, perfumed with sun-dappled patience~ above thistle-stitched sigh of skin-thin pines...? If sadness were a spirit ~ she would be exhaling a galaxy of roses from her s o f t, blood-swirling lungs, emanating metaphors, misinterpreted by fate... I still ponder, if the fangs of goblin-verses have gnawed upon my ginger-glazed horizons~ as the twinkling veil between faith and foe has been stained with satanic swan-tears... and I remain untouched, somewhere ~ like a scent lingering in buds of skeletal silence, surfing me away, from my malevolent muse... "O' deities of life, who breathed me as a secret, I'm a massacre of poetry, my lily wings laid bare ~ I wouldn't pray to vanish from the womb, which cradled me in wrinkled rainbow croons ~ but maybe, if the rotten roots of repenting fate could be reincarnated as a kintsugi pantoum, I'd reverse those wisteria waves of seconds, that surfed my fickle footprints offshore ~ to remorseful realms without ripened rispettos... sometimes, I wish that I had never swallowed any vindictive wanderlust of the first sunshine which fell upon my infant star ~ for, suffocating in sins of the seven seas, I have become a grave for swarovski dahlias, ruffled across lethal jasmine-soaked sunsets..." from the drizzling flames of fury Belladonna butterflies b u r s t ~ as feral rose filaments grieve in celtic roars, upon ivory pedestal of nightshade champagnes where, I'm a daughter of the snake moon ~ my scales shimmering in tea-lime territories marked with venomous emerald-golds, which define the thunderous tunes of Bronte, as lightning streaks of cyanide c r a s h against the mosaic chariot of Zeus...

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Date: 11/26/2024 11:00:00 AM
Hiya, congratulations on your win that flows with your signature beauty of images and metaphors that simply dance an intricate ballet through each line. What a pleasure to read and be inspired by your artistry! Blessings.
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Date: 11/24/2024 8:06:00 PM
Outstanding piece, Hiya. So much to love: the vocabulary, the imagery, the metaphors...chef's kiss! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 11/6/2024 7:00:00 AM
Lovely juxtaposition of feelings! I loved hunted by light & sheltered by demons. poem displays a clever use of light & dark & the traverses of humans therein. twinkling veil between faith & foe / what a truthful insight: the two really are flip sides of same coin. Stained with satanic swan tears is so unusual. This poem makes me feel fibrous. Loved coming across it today. Blessings you way.
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Date: 11/6/2024 6:18:00 AM
Dear Hiya I am so surprise this magnificent write of yours did not receive POTD. This was filled with many emotions stirring up inside of me. Your many alliterations and metaphoric verses impressed me so much of your creative abilities in conveying. Wow. You are truly gifted and this is a favorite for me...
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Date: 11/4/2024 8:21:00 AM
Dear Hiya, your verse is exquisite! It is such an intricate chiaroscuro of emotions. I truly think your lexical alchemy transmutes the mundane into the heavenly realms. Your words generate a great deal of sensations that pirouette on the knife-edge of consciousness. I know you left me spellbound in a twirling reverie of ineffable beauty. Your Muse worked overtime on this one. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/3/2024 8:12:00 PM
Dear Hiya, what a deep metaphorical poem! I can only stay stunned. If You and Empress don't write their names on top of your poems, no one will be able to say who wrote them, you or Empress .. There is so much of similarity in your careful selectin of words, metaphors and your unmatched use of lovely alliterations. "I have become a grave for swarovski dahlias, ruffled across lethal jasmine-soaked sunsets..." Hiya, you prodigious poetry queen, please don't show such deep vulnerability ! I wonder if you have any bitter experience in life that has made your quill so sharp that it cuts others' hearts too...! You 'll never lose your lyrics.... be assured. Excellent.... ! Into my FAVE.
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Date: 11/3/2024 11:27:00 AM
Whoa!! I'm reading a lot of poisonous substances within the lines. I wonder who is oozing with poison. Thanks for sharing the creative lines with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/3/2024 5:29:00 AM
Heya Hiya if this doesn't place I don't know what will. Too many intriguing lines to repeat but let me just say I rather like ripened rispettos. You go snake moon rani!
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Date: 11/3/2024 3:28:00 AM
Your poem is a masterpiece full of imagery and metaphors. Alliterations abound. A true master piece, my friend.
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Date: 11/3/2024 3:18:00 AM
Dear Hiya, angelic star, where do i begin praising this poignant and soul stirring poem rich with metaphors and alliterations flowing such a way that made me feel so many emotions! Youv expressed so much here , and i cant help but resonate and i think if anyone understands metaphors and symbolism that youv used here they would also feel the depth of what youv conveyed in such a seamless manner! I especially love how youv written “ I'm a daughter of the snake moon ~”’snake moon really stood out for me, and i also love how youv questioned which gives an introspective touch , questioning what ebbs and flows within the real of life that may sometimes be chaotic and confusing too, for so many, you express that very well, as well as disappointments, sometimes in our marked territory we find our own serenity~~
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Date: 11/3/2024 3:21:00 AM
It made me tear up as i read “ "O' deities of life, who breathed me as a secret, I'm a massacre of poetry, my lily wings laid bare ~ I wouldn't pray to vanish from the womb, which cradled me in wrinkled rainbow croons ~” sigh! I feel the aura of a strong soul, one that would not abandon and shake when the evil gusts try and break you down! Resilience and vulnerability youv shown through your poem! Excellent write this is! And i think Edward Ibeh will appreciate as he always appreciates metaphors! Pleasure reading this: sending you light today and always! FAVE this is

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