If Her Walls Could Talk

Tortured heart falls in pieces to the floor of a broken home. Fear hides; the hollow chest caves like walls in wake of terror. Doors slam; screams lunge, strangled in silence. Swallow the pill of deceit 'til numbness follows. Black and blue fades to purple behind dark glasses. Paisley wallpaper cloaks shame, marks of frailty, an attempt at occlusion. Her natal star gleams; she knows not her arc of strength. If walls could expose seclusion... If only she escaped, lifted the veil; if only her walls could help and not jail. If only the fear would die at first dawn; if only the walls were friends to lean on. written September 10, 2012 for If These Walls Could Talk contest *dizain rhyme scheme ending in two couplets.
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Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 4:14 PM
A touching and sad piece of life Rhonda congrats on the placement today with it..'
A  Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Rhonda. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 8:41 AM
A sad but brilliant poem. Congrats on your win my friend. A7
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 5:07 AM
such a sad powerful write - congrats on your win Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trichet Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Man this is awesome! Great work RJS. Loved it. Congrats
Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 9:25 PM
A powerful write, Rhonda! Heartbreaking. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:36 PM
terrible Rhonda very expressive and touching pen congrats on 3rd place hugs
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Very sad, well described. Congratulations on your win. Lee
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Macfarlane Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 12:26 PM
Incredible write Rhonda! Congrats on your win. Hugs
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 9:24 AM
So sad but well told. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 7:58 AM
CONGRATS RHONDA ON AN EXQUISITE WRITE AND WIN LUV .. ANOTHER INCREDIBLE BEAUTY ..
Liwayway Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda. awesome poem :) cheers!!
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:48 PM
This is real wonderful penning! i love it. Congratulations on you win my friend!
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Nice use of form and you projected the feeling of being trapped very well! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:00 PM
A maswter piece for sure Rhonda...congrats on your win! One love. Joy Wells
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 12:11 PM
superbly penned tugging at the heartstrings, rhonda... congrats on your award!..:) hugggs
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 11:28 AM
A great poem here Rhonda!Congrats on your win.
Susan Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your #2 win in my contest! I liked the wistfulness at the end compared to the reality that it is - the dichotomy makes it heart-breaking :)
A   Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:25 AM
RHONDA, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations Rhonda on your terrific write and win xx
Darwish Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 6:25 PM
Marvellous thought provoking in few lines. I really like short but magnificent writing since it touch the heart. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Love, Khalid
Carrillo Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 1:54 PM
This is short, but very good. I like it. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Sweetheart Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 10:24 AM
very touching lines so masterfully crafted Rhonda .. truly an emphatic entry so splendidly written luv .. much luck .. yes I know what u mean about trying to blast Vie .. I had a hard time and was not going to enter so as not to hurt or offend her but thought a good old fashioned love rivalry might be a better way to relate her theme .. oh ..hope it works ..
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