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Hold On To Me- Sensual

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Hold on to me when time for you has come When earth and sky melt into throbbing sun Hold on to me when shaken to the core When you must wait for just one tremor more Hold on to me when time and space stand still When every moment builds to passion’s thrill Hold on to me when comes crescendo's time When all you feel is thunderings sublime Hold on to me and grip till earthquakes cease And hold on tight in glow of your release Hold on to me as tears wash down your face For you’ve know love that's filled with healing grace Hold on to me; be safe in haven sweet With knowledge that my love makes you complete Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/6/2015 2:51:00 AM
Yes, sensually beautiful it truly is, Eileen! Savouring the moment as the volcano erupts and lava flows...and even more as calm slowly returns. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/3/2015 11:17:00 AM
a poem that thrills Eileen hugs 7
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:35:00 PM
This offers comfort and strength to anyone who might feel alone ..Yes I see a tower of gold one can hold on to in your words,awesome.
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:18:00 PM
"Grip 'til earthquakes cease"...even without the fiery & poignant tone, that's still REALLY good advice! :D In the words of AC/DC, "YOU, shook me all night long!"
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Date: 7/31/2015 12:22:00 AM
My dear Eileen a very passionate write here, that i loved to read today! Perfect 7!
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:04:00 AM
You are one passionate lady, my dear Miss Boop! This one caught my attention... oh yah! Love, Kenny xxx
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Date: 7/30/2015 9:03:00 AM
Ooooooh la laaaaa! 7 the picture also qualifies for an ooh la la as well!
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