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Gold Rings Cold Spikes

Gold Rings   Cold Spikes


On our wedding day I said, “I do” to be true

          gold ring on my finger there were two


but  

 
I did not say, “ I do “ to a collar with cold spikes 

        to hold my life in control when you like

9/18/2016



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Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2016

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Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2016 7:09:00 PM sadly many can relate to these lines Eve:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/27/2016 10:57:00 PM Thank you, Jan Hugs Eve

Jean Murray Date: 9/19/2016 9:18:00 AM So close I am beginning to choke Eve. Well said. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/19/2016 9:17:00 PM Thank you, Jean :-)

Joe Dimino Date: 9/18/2016 10:31:00 PM Short but says a lot. Excellent write! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/19/2016 9:18:00 PM Thank you, Joe :-)

James Horn Date: 9/18/2016 6:30:00 PM ER, I love you because you met my likes. Jim Horn Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/18/2016 7:38:00 PM Love you tooo, James Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner Date: 9/18/2016 11:46:00 AM It happens more than we know, that's for sure. A poem many will relate to unfortunately, Mrs Eve. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/18/2016 5:53:00 PM Yes many, Daniel, :( so sad.. Thank you for reading Hugs Eve