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Gold Rings Cold Spikes

Gold Rings Cold Spikes On our wedding day I said, “I do” to be true gold ring on my finger there were two but I did not say, “ I do “ to a collar with cold spikes to hold my life in control when you like 9/18/2016 fictional

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2016 7:09:00 PM

sadly many can relate to these lines Eve:-( hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 9/27/2016 10:57:00 PM

Thank you, Jan Hugs Eve

Jean Murray

Date: 9/19/2016 9:18:00 AM

So close I am beginning to choke Eve. Well said.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/19/2016 9:17:00 PM

Thank you, Jean :-)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/18/2016 10:31:00 PM

Short but says a lot. Excellent write!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/19/2016 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Joe :-)

James Horn

Date: 9/18/2016 6:30:00 PM

ER, I love you because you met my likes. Jim Horn

Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2016 7:38:00 PM

Love you tooo, James Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/18/2016 11:46:00 AM

It happens more than we know, that's for sure. A poem many will relate to unfortunately, Mrs Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2016 5:53:00 PM

Yes many, Daniel, :( so sad.. Thank you for reading Hugs Eve