Frozen Window


Beneath the lush green meadows of my heart, 
ready to bloom when the wind sways them, 
there were frozen chunks of snow, 
that had never molten into drops of nothingness. 
They survived, only to remind me that I had come far,
yet whenever I looked back, 
all those years would seem close. 

Perhaps the window to those frozen chunks remained
to remind me all that could have been, 
but all that shouldn't have been too. 
And from every step that I took forward, 
I moved into new meadows 
but this window moved with me, 
and I looked back, 
to take a glimpse of all the pages again. 
Being helplessly foolish, 
perhaps greedy to travel back and forth 
into that hilltop that cried for me, 
or that road which I had cried for.

They have transformed, so have I
my journey had been evolving me 
into someone I had to be, 
my age had been moving forth, 
but that window kept adding frames 
of those forgotten tales I had once intended to live.

So one day I painted that window 
and kept it as a memoir of who I was, 
to celebrate who I had become. 
And from that day on it became a legend 
to be remembered in old tales, 
which did not matter any more.

I peeped into the chunks of snow
and found them looking back at me
but they are ghosts of memories
to live tales of someone else now.


June 28, 2020

STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(2) any theme any form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~Winner: 1st Place
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Rose  Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 1:06 PM
I have enjoyed your memoirs so completely Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place . xo
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Glad you enjoyed my words. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Much love
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Exceptional poetry my friend. I am delighted to have found such wondrously wrought verses and inner depths from a poet's true heart revealed.. Again, a fav. God bless...
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:29 PM
I am glad you love my words Robert. Thank you for your kind visit and gracious words of encouragement. God bless you :)
Deepa Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Loved the last two stanzas very much.. Haunted memories..:-) Congratulations on your top win mam:-) Keep writing and inspiring. Much love~Deepa
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:29 PM
I am glad you love my words dear Deepa! Thanks for your gracious appreciation. Blessings and lots of love :)
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Wonderful poem of memories. congrats on your win!
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation. Blessings :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Such a creative and original verse. I simply love it!! God bless you with many more amazing writes. Love, Gina
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation Gina! Blessings and love :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:09 PM
Beautifully executed my dear, Aditi, the quality of your endeavor here is simply immeasurable, my compliments on your 1st Place achievement -- Aloha~@William
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:27 PM
I am really honored by your visit and kind words of appreciation William! Thank you. Blessings :)
Boddie Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 10:36 AM
at the beginning all was great....never did i ever anticipate....all the rocky roads and obstacles....it seemed to pass was impossible....then i looked so very deep inside....what do you know, i found my pride....so i gathered myself and i passed through....i will never return, i will leave them for you....very inspiring selection aditi....
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Your gracious comment is a wonderful interpretation of my thoughts Eric! Love these thoughtful words. Thanks for your visit and appreciation :) Blessings!
Soni Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:19 AM
So beautiful Aditi. I absolutely loved this. Rashi
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Glad you love my words Rashi. Thank your for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Neumann Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Meaningful reflections and memories...
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thank you for your appreciation Kai. Blessings :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:26 PM
but that window kept adding frames of those forgotten tales I had once intended to live...we all have to accept what we’ve accomplished even when it wasn’t the hoped for direction. Life is!
Mishra Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:41 PM
True words Kim. We learn as we grow in our lives and when we look back these lessons seem destined even if we understand them quite late :) Thanks for your visit and kind words. Blessings and love
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