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For Four beautiful lines contest written March 8 2025

Blue bird song serenade 
Basking in golden sun rays 

In his beak red worm betrayed
By empty ant hill of brown clay

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James Peranteau

Date: 3/14/2025 9:12:00 PM

the werdz you used hear are beautiful werdz indeed dear poet, yet; I wouldn't want to be the werm, not much thuh beautiful scenario ') have a wonderful Spring Karen....much love

Karen Jones
Date: 3/14/2025 11:38:00 PM

Aw happy spring and much love returned dear James and thanks

John Read

Date: 3/14/2025 11:53:00 AM

I feel for the red worm lol,good luck in the contest Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/14/2025 8:14:00 PM

Thanks but I didn’t place! Lol

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/11/2025 8:25:00 PM

I enjoy your picturesque poem. It has a humorous story.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/12/2025 12:11:00 AM

lol thanks Hilda

David Crandall

Date: 3/11/2025 5:38:00 PM

That's a happy bluebird :-)!

Karen Jones
Date: 3/11/2025 5:43:00 PM

lol but a sad worm

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2025 2:58:00 PM

I agree with Valsa. A great visual

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2025 3:17:00 PM

Thanks for reading!

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2025 2:03:00 AM

I can visualize this blue bird serenading, early in the morning basking in the warmth of the rising sun. A lovely image drawn in four beautiful lines.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2025 5:36:00 AM

Good morning Valsa! Have a blessed day!