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For the Birds

dim drab
icy cold
song-less 
pop open an eye
see my breath
like band-aides
rip these covers off
desperate stumbling
forced march 
to Coffee
shivering 
mission 
complete
retreat 
back to bed
burrowing deep
hood over my head
poor souls
who must rise
I close my eyes
roll over
and wait 
for warmth
to waft
through the walls of
this cruel world
lucky souls
who gotta girl
to cuddle up to
comfort and freedom
never existed
in one package 
for me
never was an angel
to set me free
she peeks over
the mountains east
my pretty girl
light slips through 
blind slits
in deep winter
how I miss
the birds I 
should've
could've 
flown 
too
maybe Ecuador 
or Peru
dear house I'm
here with you
so many things
make me stay
get rid of one 
ball and chain
clap on another
starting to feel
warm rays
penetrate 
this space
need to move
be in this day
soon enough
birds will
come back to play
there's one now
faintly chirping 
alone
soul hurting
feathered friend
gonna go hang 
a feeder in my tree
fill it with seed
make cold mornings 
brighter
for the birds
and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/20/2023 7:34:00 AM
Warmth in a bird feeder - love it Steven :)
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Date: 1/20/2023 7:33:00 AM
Warmth in a bird feeder - love it Steven :)
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:53:00 AM
Enjoyed the shifting moods in your poem, Really liked, “dear house I'm here with you so many things make me stay get rid of one ball and chain clap on another”. SuZ
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Date: 1/18/2023 6:11:00 PM
This is very Bukowski. I'm digging it. It draws the reader in closer to the warmth of things, albeit a frozen panorama. There is sunlight and warmth, this heals all wounds. One of your best poems, I have read so far.
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Steven Young
Date: 1/18/2023 6:36:00 PM
Bukowski... huh? I feel that irreverent sometimes... but I let the blue bird out. You sure make nice comments, Leanne. Thank you :)

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