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Fish Fodder

Bud went out to sea with his friends The ship started tipping on end To the lifeboats they ran like sardines in a can with women packed under the men! While some took advantage of this Some others stole more than a kiss Bud ran out of luck His zipper got stuck and "zip" went his chance for some bliss ! The lifeboat soon hissed in the water Bud uttered, "There sputters a crater!!!!" The lifeboats were sinking and sharks must be thinking "We'll soon have fresh mutters and fodders" !! ----------------------------------------- For Carolyn's Contest: Vacation Humor 7/21/14

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/30/2014 12:15:00 PM

Definitely a groaner! Congrats on the win... Couldn't help myself... Had to read it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:50:00 PM

Nice win..PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2014 8:18:00 AM

Great witty ones Carrie ! U hv an a amazing pen ,, congrats on fantastic win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/27/2014 7:24:00 AM

Very funny, I enjoyed reading this, grats on your win!

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/27/2014 6:21:00 AM

There she blows! Well done on a funny limerick, Carrie! Cheers, Roy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2014 12:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this humorous string of Limerick, carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/26/2014 4:13:00 PM

Very funny Carrie. Great win. I think its the best of all. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:54:00 PM

what a very clever play on words and great creativity, CArrie. Wish I had thought of something for this contest. Congrats to you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2014 1:34:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/26/2014 11:57:00 AM

OMG - this is so funny! I got an extra chuckle from this hilarious piece as my husband's nickname is "Bud." I love it so much - he too was tickled. Congratulations on a great well-deserved win!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/26/2014 11:35:00 AM

Dear Carrie, I have always admired your writing talent and am amazed by the humor in this excellent limerick. Bravo! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus

Date: 7/21/2014 5:03:00 PM

Great witty set of limericks, Carrie! I am sure Carolyn will love this! I did:) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/26/2014 6:15:00 PM

..back with merited congratulations!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/21/2014 3:06:00 PM

Hahaha..enjoyed the humour here Carrie!Good Limerick by you!How are you?

Carrie Richards
Date: 7/21/2014 7:25:00 PM

Hello Kash! It was so nice to hear from you, (in spite of how silly this poem may be!!), I've missed having you around the soup more often....you have always been one of my constant helpers and a friend to many of us! You have been missed! I hope you are still writing those wonderful haikus ! Best wishes in your writing, and in everything else you may be doing these days! :)