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Field of Forgiveness

Written: December 04, 2024, For Contest, Sponsored by: Ink Empress ________________________________ A grimacing goon in a destructive drug-driven delirium  faces a catastrophic downfall. The sting of spite lingers as he suffers from heavy blues in the elderly enigmatic endeavors A strong sentinel for his sibling, Their complaints are crumbling, He floats through fluffy clouds grappling in disbelief, distress, and disdain. Yet hope hammers the horizon. Your face was once vividly seen. is now ruby-hued, writhing in wrath. Explosive eruptions arise.  After the earthquake, verve ebbs, your hostility haunts my haven, yet soothing serenades  summon me to surrender. I must span the katabatic abyss, to set you free, from brobdingnagian feel for breaking my heart. To reject the roots of anathema, that threaten to stifle and suffocate, the delicate petals of forgiveness. How is it possible, purely through  pulsing points of Ylem? By bending boldly on benevolence. Your image is stamped in my mind, an artwork of bruises and hiccups, knuckles spun phantasmagorically as hell. I've lost my dreams to sticky sheets, how can I rest and watch flames split mist? as gibbous ashes from a quenched fire?  My cozy haven of memories drifting forward, a synapse to drain I met my illusive glance at night. Mindfulness is my strength, tragic tears, and shaking stories Debuted at metamorphosis, embracing the gritty gift of grace. Reheating his meal brings solace, after their fierce argument ensuring he is warmly comforted, before plunging into pitch darkness. She remains silent but gently seals his slumber with a kiss. Forgive with a fleeting flicker of feelings, wiping away the wild, vibrant bulwark to reveal the whispering waves of gray, beyond your blank, breathless beams. My fear is coursing through putrid veins. I long for a braw and caring elitism,  positively handles sepulchral hypocrisy. Forgiveness flourishes when he whispers warmly. She tosses aside her treasured trinket  and discards the trash. She will not ostracize the sunrise vitae. He holds her close and hushes her heated weeping. Continue cruising with  minimal mulch movement Floral finery flies as seeds soar. With the looking glass of lost hunger, how hollow the hustle  and a headpiece appears. Previous petty disputes proved  pointless in pursuit of peace. The path presents a persistent frown. moreover, when deeply upset, Spoken words strain the soul. Only love and care  truly matter in this life. Reflect for peace,  sharpen a pointed blade. Forgiveness fosters joy and a fierce fray. It is both inspiring and meaningful. For an astonishing life on Earth,  I aim to forgive, be free, and laud love. Move away from the rage furrow.  I forgive you—false foe.  Be resilient, positive, and bright, Giving our rival an opportunity despite frailty, seek happiness shiny steered groove loops, an abrupt turn from wanton In prayer, enchanting ember elves,  elevate each essence to an exquisite elixir seeking a solemn surrender.

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:24:00 PM
What a profound poem written inspired by my contest, i think youv forgotten to enter this into the contest cus i don’t remember reading this before. But i must say as always your wisdom and how youv elaborated on forgiveness is beyond soulful! “ Forgiveness fosters joy and a fierce fray. It is both inspiring and meaningful.” i agree , and to be free and to live free one must forgive not just others but ourselves too! Brilliant alliterations and profound diction! Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light
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Date: 12/19/2024 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much dearest Ink for your wonderful words, indeed this was written specifically to your contest but I missed to submit it. My memory is getting weaker and this is the second contest I missed to enter. My very best regards and warmest hugs send your way
Date: 12/8/2024 1:10:00 AM
"Forgiveness fosters joy and a fierce fray. It is both inspiring and meaningful. For an astonishing life on Earth, I aim to forgive, be free, and laud love. Move away from the rage furrow." A great conclusion to a great poem. Though he has given her only bruises and hiccups in life, she is willing to forgive him. She knows- 'Only love and care truly matter in this life.' When she shows forgiveness and affection, it is warmly reciprocated. So all hostility ceases and gives the rival a chance to seek happiness. Such a lovely poem on the magic, forgiveness can create. A great entry for the contest. All the best dear Lasaad.
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Date: 12/7/2024 1:23:00 AM
Another great message written by you my friend. Forgiveness you write about how important it is to do so, If not the pains and struggles someone brings up on themselves. Forgiving brings closure and happiness to one's self. Enjoyed reading Lasaad. Another inspiring message by you...
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:51:00 AM
SP, an ode pointing to the benefit to forgiveness. The emotional roller coaster of the anger and tenderness are a huge contrast. Really a striking amount of very strong feeling and scene. Smiles, of course.
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:01:00 AM
To learn to forgive is powerful, it releases one of a mind in turmoil and a guilt that should be erased. Your so eloquent write my friend is totally awesome,. Inspiring and breathtaking. Blessings my friend Sotto , Jennifer.
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Date: 12/4/2024 9:42:00 PM
This had me thinking sooo much. Your writing is so powerful. Always enjoy it.
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