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Not been inspired recently....

Seems even my surroundings offer no inpsiration...

This poem is a bit forced.

Fingers tremble, like an alcoholic without a bottle. His pen is graceful in its slumber, but imprisoned ink desires to be free - intoxicated by his poetry. Lips are forever silent, in the absence of inspiration. Isolated in the boredom of blankness - congested to think enough, struggling to feel enough. Fault is not in the poet, but in his absent mind - which is a metaphorical candle. Each drip creating pools of dusty wax, as ebony wick struggles to keep flame alight. Monsters of the mind keep musings locked away, so he turns to poets from the past - but even Rumi cannot rekindle his desires. Eyes gaze among petals for stimulation, but their dormant fragrance offers no solution - he is blinded by loss of concentration. He wonder if his mind has become a flower, out of season, but refusing to die. He reflects upon love and lovers, past, present and future, but it does not liberate his ink - maybe romance is out of fashion. As his tongue tastes autumn's crispy air, gloomy horizons summon birds south - their songs of joy soften into muteness. He feel for their empty nests, now visible through naked trees. Yet no outpouring of poetic observations, overcome him - have birds taken his muse? Maybe the fault is in the birds, maybe the fault is in the question...

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Date: 11/8/2020 10:26:00 AM
This is phenomenal! Excellent work!
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:10:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/5/2020 6:35:00 PM
Back to read this masterpiece again, Silent One. Hope you have a great night :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 2:13:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/6/2020 3:53:00 PM
For an uninspired poet, you came up with some very vivid, moving descriptions! :-) Janice
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Silent One
Date: 10/8/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 10/4/2020 9:12:00 PM
Silent One, your poignant pen certainly spills an inspired impassioned lament for the absence of your muse. The aching loss of your muse is pondered in the thoughtful facets of your poem and I especially love your last two lines. Such a moving piece, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Silent One
Date: 10/5/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/4/2020 6:20:00 AM
Well expressed Silent One! I could feel it as I read this. Excellent :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/4/2020 5:31:00 AM
Lovely poetry, Si; too many great inferences to pick out one particular -- splendid imagery! Maybe the fault is in the poem; for the poet can make emptiness tingle...and even death, their ghosts rise up and do a jig -- for the poet is not small nor big...he is simply omnipotent:)
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:38:00 AM
That is a great views.. Thank you Joe
Date: 10/3/2020 10:41:00 PM
I love the way you liken loss of inspiration to autumn and the birds having left. Your poem is so beautiful, and seems anything but forced.
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:39:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/3/2020 10:23:00 PM
we all have writer's block. I don't think this poem is forced. Deep and thought provoking. ~~
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:48:00 AM
This is not really about writers block, more about no enthusiasm for many things.. Thanks
Date: 10/3/2020 7:06:00 PM
I hope you chase away those monsters and find the key to unlock your mind. Terrific write S.O. Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thank you.. I am trying...
Date: 10/3/2020 6:42:00 PM
but imprisoned ink desires to be free - intoxicated by his poetry... So much impact of this musing and the final two lines. This is a fave!
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 10/3/2020 6:34:00 PM
"Imprisoned ink desires to be free -" I know this feeling. It is not the words fault or fault of the poet. I told a friend this and I find it to be true. Words find you, when the time is right. Seems words have found you, even in moments of no inspiration. Well done Silent One. These words may seem forced to you, but this is amazing. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/3/2020 6:04:00 PM
Ah, I pray that muse comes back like the birds every springtime bay it return bringing you sweet imagination and a magic pen that never runs out of ink. I love your poems with or without the muse, good night Silent One
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:49:00 AM
thank you, I think the birds want to keep it...
Date: 10/3/2020 1:37:00 PM
Indeed, the poet is not to blame.. as the pen denies its flow.. or as the Muse of poetry refuses its inspiring verses.. the poet, a beautiful soul whose heart and mind treading different paths of different worlds.. and sometimes caught elsewhere! Great musing of depth I do relate to.. a great pleasure reading your thoughts and feelings, Silent One! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Besma..
Date: 10/3/2020 12:58:00 PM
This is a very good poem! I understand ink being imprisoned. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Peace, Angie
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Angela... It serves very little purpose imprisoned.
Date: 10/3/2020 11:36:00 AM
Perhaps the ink is still evolving? Aloha! Rico
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 12:30:00 PM
The ink is always evolving.... Sometimes erupting like a volcano
Date: 10/3/2020 10:49:00 AM
- One of the most magical things about poetry is how different we can interpret it ... this writing is very impressive, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 12:31:00 PM
I agree... Thank yoi
Date: 10/3/2020 10:34:00 AM
I can truly relate to a missing muse and lack of inspiration! But even in these times, I think we still take in and subconsciously file things away for a future revelation at some point. You still bring beautiful poetry to the table here, Silent. I appreciate your honest musings. :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 12:40:00 PM
I think I've lost interest in a lot of things, including poetry ... Must be covid situation... I have a spoken word performance on Thursday, so thought I should express how I feel at the moment... Thank you Laura
Date: 10/3/2020 7:58:00 AM
I always find life events can turn your world upside down, stealing your train of thoughts and no matter how hard you try, your poetic mind is blank. Hope you're well, S. O. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 12:40:00 PM
It's always easier when it is something personal to us... Thank you Tom
Date: 10/3/2020 7:02:00 AM
Dear Silent One, I really like this poem. I like that you describe writer's block as "the mind, a flower out of season". Good write.
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thank you... This was a lack of inspiration and I guess enthusiasm, rather than the block.
Date: 10/3/2020 5:44:00 AM
Your 2nd stanza reflects how I feel at times Silent One, and no matter what it takes nothing comes to mind. Sometimes 5 or 6 days pass before I am in the mood to write, and then I write two or three and leave them on my computer. Lovely poem Silent one, Blessings and hugs Jennifer
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:40:00 AM
Haven't seen much of you lately my friend--your poem partly explains why. Many can relate to a poet's mind dwelling in introspection, as you have done in this poem, when earthly stimuli don't offer inspiration. To me that too is great poetry! Hold on to your lyrics, music, garden, love--they will soon communicate.
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Vijay.. wanted to defeat the monsters and set the pen free .
Date: 10/3/2020 4:10:00 AM
Wow and double wow. This is amazing, SO... colors the world in hues of passion and grace and everything praiseworthy. Such a "muse" you cannot force... it is glimmering with liquid flames of inspiration, caressing the very soul with imagination! I love it - as is usual, this is a fave! Much love and many prayers, Gina
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Silent One
Date: 10/3/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you for always being an avid reader

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