Factory Recall

Factory Recall

I looked beyond The Open Door 
into a mystical Soul Factory
There amidst  the unboxed souls
was Invisible Jim and The Ghost.
The ghost’s skin was reflective like a mirror 
allowing me to see The Lines on my Face.

The factory was an unusual place
with floors carpeted in Dandelions
At each station angels sang a Star Baby Lullaby 
I asked one “What are you doing?”
She smiled and responded
 “I am installing a Patriotic Pause.”

An overhead speaker blared
“It is time for Designated Rain,”
I was careful to protect
the Butterfly in My Pocket.
Workers started moving
so I asked “Where are you going?”
“We are Stepping into The Temple.”
“May I ask Why?” “Sure, we are Searching For Jesus.”
So I followed the Girl With The Quiet Voice.

I was unsure How To Feel,
so I began by Lending Both Hands.
It helped in Finding My Way..
I was then joined by The Borrower.
He Was the one Who I Am
but Some Time we’re not Close Enough to Know.
Perhaps I need some Kimo Therapy

I was directed to Rose in The Garden.
Her roots had Deep Inclinations.
Would I Abandon all for This Dark Lover?
She set me on my Memory Go Round.
That place of Painted Ladies and Weeping
There I searched for Guys Advice in a Fools Paradise 
Inside of me A Sense of Emptiness,
still she would become my Favourite Mistake.
She Touched The Water and my soul
becoming My Ocean.

Still I have Unanswered Questions
Some might say a Bad Bargain Made.
At the Soul Factory I left behind
my Church Perfect Surface.
In my Minds Eye the Screen Flickers.
Change Ain’t Easy but now I’m Different.
The breeze Whispered Your Name.
While I was looking for Psychedelic Sound!
No I know why I Can’t Get High Enough. 
Instead  let me rest in a the place of Chaotic peaceful Thoughts.
There I can sit under the Wisdom Tree
and listen to The Quiet One.
That garden where angels do the Butterfly Dance.
I long to languish there in Rainbow Coloured Camouflage.


By Richard Lamoureux

I wrote this one for Charlie’s contest using my titles from past poems. I didn’t read the directions properly so wrote another one that I entered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Raven Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Hi Richard, you have put your titles together in a wonderful word collage. This is something I could never do and I wouldn't even try. The content just flows from start to finish. A definite fav my friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 5:34 PM
This is magnificent Rick! It drew me in and keep getting better and better until your stunningly beautiful ending. So well crafted. I know how much time it takes to combine the titles so they are relatable. Bravo! : ) xxoo
Mchattie Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Oh. How I long for the shade of the wisdom tree. Wonderful write my friend. Have a great day.
Callus Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 3:16 PM
You have done wonders with your titles, Richard! Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 7:07 PM
What an amazing write Rick! You had me captive in the poetic depths of this one :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Thanks Sandra.
Leiser Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Your imaginative story is so fascinating, and filled with layers of meanings, Richard! It is so be of those poems one reads again and again..intriguing! I enjoyed reading this! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Thanks Laura.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 7:17 PM
oh yes, I found it so interesting and was thinking you had added words in. This was fantastic imagination shown.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Milgate Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 7:17 PM
from a contest on use of titles? I think this is so interesting and pulling all of this together there were parts of it I found really fascinating.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.
Godwin Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:06 PM
This works, to me, it flows just like dreams do; senseless yet making sense in the creative, clear cut way gaps in dreams come together. You know, I could NOT write anything I found sensible for this contest so I'm very impressed that you wrote two. The process bent my mind in uncomfortable ways - it just wouldn't come together as a poem. I wish to find your contest entry now - I'm curious. All the best ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for reading them both.
Rose  Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:25 AM
OMG, I love it Richard. One of my favorite poems from you. I'm gonna keep this one its a keepsake . Your one amazing writer and I am sorry I don't come around more often. Have a wonderful day, you won my admiration today xo
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 8:56 AM
My my, thanks Pixie, so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Mcferran Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Glad you misread the instructions at first... because this is a stunner! Great work!! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again Rhona.
Messina Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Wow, this was amazing Richard. I believe I would have ranked this one just the same as I ranked the other one. Thank you for bringing this to my attention...Excellent collaboration and very very well done. All the best. Charlie
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 7:06 PM
I added filler words so I didn’t want to cheat. This way I ended up with two poems for the price of one! Thanks for reading it Charlie.
Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 5:29 PM
ohh, rich...the pulsing image is here described strongly...very nice!...huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 7:06 PM
Thanks for the visit and the hug.
Horsman Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:59 PM
So intriguing, different titles, woven together, a favourite pastime of my own, Richard,,really love this..
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Thanks Harry.
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:36 PM
- A wonderful poem, Richard ... really impressive with your titles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your kind visit and hug.
Proxenos Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Hi again, Looked but can't seem to find your other poem entered Richard - this one I loved so creative and full of imagery using titles from past poems. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:04 AM
It has a CT after the title. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Proxenos Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:11 PM
This one sounds great Richard but on way way to reread your new entry! Hugs, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:10 PM
WoW! Richard, I read both entries and they both were outstanding! You always pick good titles for your poems. That is why both poems were so good. I enjoyed the read. Have a good day:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:06 AM
What a great comment, thanks Alexis.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Wow! This is from your titles? What an imagination! Truly creative! Wow! Wow! Wow! Great one!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 12:06 AM
Thanks Caren. Much appreciated!
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