Eyes Like a Hawk

My mom has eyes like a hawk. 
They‘re in the back of her head. 
In town, she told me not to gawk.
I followed down the path she led.

We saw a tiger wearing skates
I stared and saw her scowl!	
There was a basket full of snakes. 
Still she glared a look most foul!

We watched a ferret playing dead
I laughed and thought she’d faint.
When I petted the eagle’s bald head
she tapped her foot in complaint.

We spied a coyote wearing boots
and I smiled a big wide grin.
Amid the monkeys howls and hoots,
she warned me once again.

We heard the cry of the muted owl
and when I ventured forth to see
the warning I had heard her growl
stirred a sudden fear in me. 

We passed many a strange sight,
and I could not help but look.
She told me it was impolite.
That was the last trip we took.

21 September 2022
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September 28, 2022 at 8:32 PM
I think manners were far more enforced by the mum's of yesteryear, and sometimes we may have felt that they were unfair and extreme. Sadly many of their teaching have disappeared along with the good manners they taught. A lovely fanciful poem to read Linda. I detected a subtle message in it.
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September 29, 2022 at 5:41 AM
I agree with you Wendy. My mother was very strict about etiquette and, as you say, sometimes I felt stifled by it. However, her lessons have served me well and I am so grateful to her for them. I am glad you enjoyed my poem :) Linda
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September 24, 2022 at 11:19 PM
A big imagination on a walk that didn't seem that much fun. Nice imagery in this one, Linda. Have a nice weekend, my friend. Bill
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 6:22 AM
Hey Bill. How's it going? I appreciate your visit and comments. :) Linda
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September 24, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Ahhh!! Whoa!! I think your mom had her hands full with the little ones. I like the way you did this one. The metaphors, etc. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Hi Sara. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my fun, silly poem. :) Linda
Wells Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:38 PM
I guess mom was very stern. Fortunately, you still managed to be a keen observer with a clever imagination, just the qualities needed to write excellent poetry! Be well always, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Hi Thomas. It's nice to have you visit. Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. Linda
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September 22, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Nice pen Linda, good rhyme and flow with really good imagery too.
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 4:18 PM
Hello Gordon Nice to have you visit. :) Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read and comment. Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Seems like Mom -- with eyes like a hawk -- was one of the crew there! lol... Take any trips with Dad?! Keep smiling now, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 6:37 AM
LOL. Trips with Dad were altogether different. :)) laf
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:58 PM
seems to me like she took you to a zoo!!! Very cute poem!
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Thanks Andrea...the young often see things that older folks don't! Linda
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September 21, 2022 at 12:56 PM
I agree. I'll never visit a zoon like your mum's.
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 1:33 PM
It was an interesting trip Victor :) Linda
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