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Ekphrasis On Monet's Water Lilies

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Floating fluttering fleurs
are jewels in fuchsia and magenta
transmuting into taffy hue
with the kiss of dappled sunlight
like her cheeks that blush in pink
with his wondering wink.

The willows are stalactites 
seducing newly bloomed nympheas
slumbering in Egyptian blue water 
like her shaggy windswept hair
teasing her beloved's face
beneath the dancing moonlight.

Oh, Monet,
your 'en plein air' emphyrean elegance
awakens my sacrosanct senses 
as I envisage a Filbert brush
glazing each pearly petal
highlighting sun's luster
on emerald to lime leaves,
on cyan to admiral water,
reflecting cerulean sky
in consummate chiaroscuro. 





7 April 2022


A Briand Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
8th place


Notes: 
In 1893, Monet, a passionate horticulturist, purchased land with a pond near his property in Giverny, intending to build something "for the pleasure of the eye and also for motifs to paint." The Water Lilies is a 1919 painting by impressionist Claude Monet, one of his Water Lilies series. The painting, the left hand panel of a large pair, depicts a scene in Monet's French pond showing light reflecting off the water with water lilies on the surface. 
(www.metmuseum.org)

*plein-air painting, in its strictest sense, the practice of painting landscape pictures out-of-doors; more loosely, the achievement of an intense impression of the open air (French: plein air) in a landscape painting(www.britannica.com).

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Date: 4/14/2022 12:01:00 PM
Your skill is writing ekphrasis just sings in this lovely poem JCB. It evokes a sense of the serene and the tranquility of the gazing on the water lilies! Congratulations on this well deserved win! Blessings! Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/9/2022 12:27:00 AM
Your words are more beautiful than the Monet if you ask me.
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Date: 4/8/2022 4:28:00 AM
Monet should be the master creator. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2022 11:19:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery and I see you won a contest with it. Big congrats. Well deserved.
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Date: 4/7/2022 8:43:00 AM
This is a fabulous poem ! Monet might not have dreamed that such a beautiful poem would emerge from a poet seeing his painting . The last stanza is indeed a marvel of beauty ! Congratulations on your great win, Jez !
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Date: 4/7/2022 6:51:00 AM
Just how beautiful this is, JCB! a fave! Love that first and third lines, the stalactite reference and all the colorful imagery and lovely wording! So well done! Congratulations! A fave!
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Date: 4/7/2022 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations, JCB, on your fabulous win. This poem took my breath away - to my faves. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/6/2022 8:19:00 PM
JCB, the images in this beautiful verse are exquisite. I enjoyed reading it very much. Blessings
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Date: 4/6/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn for your appreciation. More blessing to you.

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