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Efficacious Ii - For Adult Contest

EFFICACIOUS ii - (“FOR ADULT CONTEST”) Despite how difficult it is everyone has to grow up. Embracing the world with or without an agenda, Adulthood is such a SWOT analysis. Strengthen to progress… Weaken in the process… Opportunity is a knock away. Treat yourself with positive thinking. Step forward with your bat. Strike and maybe it will leave the ballpark. If you strike out, do not fret. Life as an adult has its disappointments. Next step is coming up fast. Hang tough so that you will be who laugh last. Your strides diversify. This is the true meaning of being an adult. You are your own self-worth. [End of Poem] Philosophical Tenet: We are our own creation! ___________________________________ Penned April 21, 2015!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/27/2015 7:27:00 AM

I like the feeling of determination within these words.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/1/2015 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Richard. May I pay you a visit? Smile... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/25/2015 7:16:00 AM

thickened with wisdom and powerful!!!..olive eloisa :)!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/25/2015 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Olive... Verlena

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/23/2015 7:59:00 AM

As adult as they come... go out, do your part and take charge. A very strong character of an adult here. Loved it Verlena. A 7 Blessings for the contest. :)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/23/2015 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Kim... Verlena

Joseph May

Date: 4/21/2015 10:59:00 PM

Very good advice ...good luck in the contest

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/22/2015 12:50:00 AM

Thanks Joseph! Verlena

Judy Konos

Date: 4/21/2015 4:48:00 PM

I enjoyed this because it brought back memories...that still linger..."I never did know what I wanted to be when I grew up!" My brother wanted to drive a garbage truck but me hmmmm, I'm still thinking about it...Thanks Again

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/21/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Judy for you super-awesome response. Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 4/21/2015 4:43:00 PM

Wise words indeed Verlena - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/21/2015 4:44:00 PM

Thanks Jan for your awesome response and support of my poem in the contest... Verlena