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Each Quiver Would Fall

Penelope’s in a hopeless quandary, backed into a corner. She enjoyed the flirt of youth. Had no one warned her? She rejected freedom of reflection. ‘Who’s she? ...not a saint.’ Penelope painted on her face, mirror-perfection - faithfully quaint. Platinum blonde tresses, like a fisherman’s net, she caught men. Each quiver would fall helpless - guts and glory auf wiedersehen.* Poison of poise and perfume - ahh, ylang ylang like chains. With serpentine strength of a boa, in crushing the mighty, she reigns. Caught by two knights, found unfaithful, she’s dragged to the quay. “The truth,” one spit out. The other, “You witch!” ‘Another day perhaps she’d do penance.’ She struck fast with doppelganger asps, fastidiously holding them below their necks, she’d practiced the grasp. Dear, sweet, tears - she’d developed an antivenom and a liar’s remorse. Delicate angel, tender child - she fights fire with fire not with brute force. She drops to her knees as the knights dive and she releases the snakes. “Oh why! Oh why would these men leap to their deaths over me?” The guards believe the improbable, gushing to her aid. Penelope’s free. 2/12/2021 Mind Your P's and Q's Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner Word list: Penance Poise Perfume Platinum Quay Quiver Quandary Quaint *auf wiedersehn - goodbye

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Date: 3/8/2021 6:20:00 AM
You are awesome Kim. This is great :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Have a blessed day...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2021 9:41:00 AM
I’m glad you liked it, Paula! xxoo
Date: 3/6/2021 4:30:00 PM
you are a great story teller Kim! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2021 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! xx
Date: 3/6/2021 9:46:00 AM
Kim, this is like an updated retelling of a classic Greek myth - Penelope's peril should be required reading in high school English! A fun, creative write, congratulations and thank you for entering my contest~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2021 2:32:00 PM
LOL! Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 2/14/2021 9:10:00 PM
A lively tale, especially liked this part "perhaps she’d do penance.’ She struck fast with doppelganger asps, fastidiously holding them below their necks, she’d practiced the grasp"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2021 2:31:00 PM
Glad you liked it, sweet friend!
Date: 2/12/2021 9:27:00 AM
Such a tale... Wow. Love and prayers for you, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, Gina! Love and prayers for you too!
Date: 2/12/2021 9:10:00 AM
Remind me to keep my distance and stay calm. :)~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2021 11:19:00 AM
LOL! ;)

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