Each Quiver Would Fall

Penelope’s in a hopeless quandary, backed into a corner.
She enjoyed the flirt of youth. Had no one warned her?
She rejected freedom of reflection. ‘Who’s she? ...not a saint.’
Penelope painted on her face, mirror-perfection - faithfully quaint.
Platinum blonde tresses, like a fisherman’s net, she caught men.
Each quiver would fall helpless -  guts and glory auf wiedersehen.*
Poison of poise and perfume - ahh, ylang ylang like chains.
With serpentine strength of a boa, in crushing the mighty, she reigns.
Caught by two knights, found unfaithful, she’s dragged to the quay.
“The truth,” one spit out. The other, “You witch!”   ‘Another day
perhaps she’d do penance.’  She struck fast with doppelganger asps,
fastidiously holding them below their necks, she’d practiced the grasp.
Dear, sweet, tears - she’d developed an antivenom and a liar’s remorse.
Delicate angel, tender child -  she fights fire with fire not with brute force.
She drops to her knees as the knights dive and she releases the snakes.
“Oh why! Oh why would these men leap to their deaths over me?”
The guards believe the improbable, gushing to her aid. Penelope’s free.

2/12/2021
Mind Your P's and Q's Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner
Word list:
Penance  Poise Perfume Platinum
Quay Quiver Quandary Quaint


*auf wiedersehn - goodbye
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Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:20 AM
You are awesome Kim. This is great :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Have a blessed day...............
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 9:41 AM
I’m glad you liked it, Paula! xxoo
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 4:30 PM
you are a great story teller Kim! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! xx
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Kim, this is like an updated retelling of a classic Greek myth - Penelope's peril should be required reading in high school English! A fun, creative write, congratulations and thank you for entering my contest~
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:32 PM
LOL! Thanks, Michelle!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 9:10 PM
A lively tale, especially liked this part "perhaps she’d do penance.’ She struck fast with doppelganger asps, fastidiously holding them below their necks, she’d practiced the grasp"
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Glad you liked it, sweet friend!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Such a tale... Wow. Love and prayers for you, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Thank you, Gina! Love and prayers for you too!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Remind me to keep my distance and stay calm. :)~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:19 AM
LOL! ;)
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