Dust in My Heart

Three minuuts is all me’ve got
to fix sense of it, alles not.
Whutis time in tru sens of tings
wen you and mestart to zings
of lifinluv of all that is,
or izunt, in this heady quiz?

Life’ll livun tillit diez
then whutstocomm in the skiez?
Dusto dust is whutis sade
anthen what – where dus dust go?
I dunno and don tinktha you do too.
I'd like to tinktha dust arrize – surprize!

Koment doz not define dedend.
Iznotso ezzy to defend it.
Dustit fliz, in air it blos
to landzen, feilsen, mountens too.
Life beginagin an then enden witit.
Three minuuts to hold dust in my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 8:59 PM
I'm wondering if I should be concerned on account that I understood this. :) Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:22 AM
LOL Gary. I think you’re safe! :)
Crandall Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:53 PM
dustiz is as dustiz duz asky why, me sez becuz or mehbe dustiz goze uppa spout thats what Vogon pottery's abut.
Fowler Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Hysterical Dave. Write, post, risk! Dustin snezis fit witme. Dunno why yousiz dun rite assu plezez. :)
Crandall Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:54 PM
sorry, had to give it a try - lol
Crandall Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:37 PM
I thought Vogon poetry was supposed to be painfully bad, but this is great elle! I love it - highly enjoyable - more!
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:49 PM
Thank you very much Dave! I like writing Vogon although I'm never sure I have it quite right. I keep trying though. It pleases me you like it! elle :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Interestin write in almost another language…
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Like dust in my Vogon heart Kim. LOL Many thanks for commenting! :)
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:30 PM
A rejuvenation may be needed. I enjoy this poem. Nice play on dialect.
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 4:50 AM
Good morning Hilda. Thanks for your continued support! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 10:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Dust in heart, in life or in the house, comes from the dust fairy. Hahaha!!! Have a fun/blessed day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 4:50 AM
I'm with you dear Paula! It gets everywhere! There must be a dust fairy spreading her "joy". hugs :)
blegh Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 11:01 PM
Vogon poetry.. wow this is insanely incredible. I've discovered a skilled poetess today.. let's see what you have in store for the future ~ a fav
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Hello P. So nice to meat you! Thank you for the read and such nice comments. And a fav - I'm honored! :)
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