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Dust in My Heart

Three minuuts is all me’ve got to fix sense of it, alles not. Whutis time in tru sens of tings wen you and mestart to zings of lifinluv of all that is, or izunt, in this heady quiz? Life’ll livun tillit diez then whutstocomm in the skiez? Dusto dust is whutis sade anthen what – where dus dust go? I dunno and don tinktha you do too. I'd like to tinktha dust arrize – surprize! Koment doz not define dedend. Iznotso ezzy to defend it. Dustit fliz, in air it blos to landzen, feilsen, mountens too. Life beginagin an then enden witit. Three minuuts to hold dust in my heart.

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/14/2024 8:59:00 PM

I'm wondering if I should be concerned on account that I understood this. :) Cheers - Gary

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/18/2024 10:22:00 AM

LOL Gary. I think you’re safe! :)

David Crandall

Date: 10/4/2024 7:53:00 PM

dustiz is as dustiz duz asky why, me sez becuz or mehbe dustiz goze uppa spout thats what Vogon pottery's abut.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/5/2024 8:43:00 AM

Hysterical Dave. Write, post, risk! Dustin snezis fit witme. Dunno why yousiz dun rite assu plezez. :)

David Crandall
Date: 10/4/2024 7:54:00 PM

sorry, had to give it a try - lol

David Crandall

Date: 10/4/2024 7:37:00 PM

I thought Vogon poetry was supposed to be painfully bad, but this is great elle! I love it - highly enjoyable - more!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/4/2024 7:49:00 PM

Thank you very much Dave! I like writing Vogon although I'm never sure I have it quite right. I keep trying though. It pleases me you like it! elle :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2024 9:08:00 AM

Interestin write in almost another language…

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/2/2024 10:31:00 AM

Like dust in my Vogon heart Kim. LOL Many thanks for commenting! :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/24/2024 8:30:00 PM

A rejuvenation may be needed. I enjoy this poem. Nice play on dialect.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/25/2024 4:50:00 AM

Good morning Hilda. Thanks for your continued support! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/24/2024 10:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write. Dust in heart, in life or in the house, comes from the dust fairy. Hahaha!!! Have a fun/blessed day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/25/2024 4:50:00 AM

I'm with you dear Paula! It gets everywhere! There must be a dust fairy spreading her "joy". hugs :)

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/23/2024 11:01:00 PM

Vogon poetry.. wow this is insanely incredible. I've discovered a skilled poetess today.. let's see what you have in store for the future ~ a fav

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/25/2024 4:47:00 AM

Hello P. So nice to meat you! Thank you for the read and such nice comments. And a fav - I'm honored! :)