Dinner Time Afterthought

After I’d been made to eat dessert, 
You’d take me into your bedroom, 
Recall a memory of us and assert, 
With balloons no despair or gloom.


17/12/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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January 12, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations Rhoda for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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January 10, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Hi Rhoda,, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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January 4, 2016 at 10:19 AM
RHODA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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January 3, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Rhoda, thank you for your participation in my contest, your poem was short and sweet :)-luloo
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January 3, 2016 at 11:08 AM
enjoyed writing that one!
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