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Dinner Time Afterthought

After I’d been made to eat dessert, You’d take me into your bedroom, Recall a memory of us and assert, With balloons no despair or gloom. 17/12/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/12/2016 11:40:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations Rhoda for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:07:00 PM
Hi Rhoda,, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:19:00 AM
RHODA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:06:00 AM
Rhoda, thank you for your participation in my contest, your poem was short and sweet :)-luloo
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Dominique Webb
Date: 1/3/2016 11:08:00 AM
enjoyed writing that one!

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