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oh what it must be like to have a name like Devonshire a name so Royal belonging to empires chisslied in stone in swanky neighborhoods streets with large gates or statues stood the name of the restaurant or the name on the deed so high up in the building somewhere having tea a heavily Britished accent with eyes half way closed a chin lifted up wearing butler clothes they really do wear ascots like they do on t.v. but we'll never see them there to high to see away in their clubs or on the golf course watching the symphony or getting divorced you might catch a glimpse of them if you travel abroad sunning topless on beaches or bottle popping at night their such a restless little crowd to them the world is small they wrestle with there empires and try to take it all i hope i didn't offend anyone by using their name i sat down to write this poem and this is what came any similarities to persons we know is purely coincidental it's just part of a show

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Date: 11/23/2009 7:14:00 AM
Good job, John and especially happy you included the two last verses-as you may know Carolyn Devonshire is a lovely member of our SP family. Besides that, good write! Thanks for sharing. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/20/2009 2:24:00 PM
Kool poem John, Devonshire is in fact a county in England. A very strong nautical area, many famous sailing gentlemen were born there as History informs us. There have even been ships in the Royal Navy called HMS Devonshire, in fact the last one was sunk in the Atlantic testing the Mark 24 - Mod-2 Tigerfish Torpedo. But Carolyn is much more beautiful than a Destroyer >> thx for your confused comment on " Leggy Bird and a Vintage Wine >> Koolio >> James
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Date: 11/19/2009 6:05:00 PM
John you sure picked a winner with this one. Carolyn is definitely top shelf in my books. Thanks for the comment. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 11/19/2009 5:09:00 PM
I used to live on Devonshire Drive in Shaker Heights, OH years ago.. seemed the people on that street were as u described in the poem.. but certainly, our Carolyn is too beautiful of a person so I know its not about that Devonshire.. great wording John and nice read.. enjoyed something a little different tonight.. thankxxx for sharing... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:24:00 PM
Devonshire,,the name reminds me of a magical place and of a magical friend,,at our site,,coincidence it is..lovely poem indeed-Charma
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Date: 11/17/2009 10:09:00 AM
I see Carolyn read this one. She is, by your definition, definitely a Devonshire. Love, daver
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:11:00 PM
Very nice poem John...enjoyed...Marty Soup Mail
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Date: 11/15/2009 10:56:00 AM
Very coincidental, indeed! LOL - Really enjoyed reading this. In fact, I have company now and they enjoyed it as well. "Devonshire" was my late husband's name and I have always associated it with a tiny English village. However, I doubt there is any topless bathing near this village in my mind. Much love and thanks for sharing this delightful read, Carolyn (to my faves, of course, dear)
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:04:00 PM
Lovely poem .. Pam
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:44:00 AM
Yes it is a beautiful name, goes along with the fame,Smile! God's best, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/13/2009 7:38:00 PM
Well it's a "good show" John ! Thank you for the little trip. .... and your gracious comments - Robert
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:35:00 PM
Great write here, John ... please fix Line #6 with the word "neighborhood" and then it will indeed be perfection worthy of a Devonshire ... LOL ... you can't be serious ... Sara Palin for President or is she sitting on a Lofty Precipice? ... LOL ... Tina Fey nailed her... smile ...
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:30:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love, fun, and loads of inspiration John. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:48:00 PM
funny,
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