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August 4, 2023

Contest : I Know You're Dying To Write A Choka

Sponsored by : Kim Rodrigues

(This is my little poetic effort in protest againt child labor)

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No toys to play with, she draws dolls on the dry soil with soft soiled fingers. The pale face is drenched, not by joyous summer rain. Is it dripping tears? The sad wet eyes graze on mother’s wilted body, age drained before time. Cute girl of sixteen, doesn’t see the hues of sunrise, sleep sags the eyelids. She drags fragile feet, goes out with mother to work, holding her frail hands. Are these only hope? Feels the touch of scant safety, childhood demolished. Days in and days out, she labors with her mother working as a maid. In her mangled mind, ruined by storm of harsh times, she outgrows her age. The dreams of the child have died.

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Date: 8/24/2023 1:53:00 AM
Congratulations! Thanks for sharing your poetic muse about a harsh reality... Being a social worker and an orphanage Mom, I pity those child-laborers, while thanking the Lord for the privilege of doing my part to advocate against child labor. God bless you.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/27/2023 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Beata.
Date: 8/21/2023 1:59:00 PM
Sadness in this write Subimal, but it is vivid in stark reality. Congratulations! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/21/2023 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for your comments.
Date: 8/21/2023 10:53:00 AM
Powerful ad poem. Good winner.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/21/2023 9:56:00 PM
Many thanks.
Date: 8/21/2023 3:25:00 AM
So sad, so very sad. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/21/2023 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Gina for your visit and comment.
Date: 8/20/2023 7:29:00 PM
Such a poignant piece, so little words, yet they pierce your soul..deserving no 1 ..Congrats. Its so unfair , children on labour,
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/20/2023 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.
Date: 8/20/2023 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, on first place! Emotive! Great imagery!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/20/2023 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for the placement. This one came out straight from my heart.
Date: 8/4/2023 8:53:00 AM
Very sad. I agree this is powerful. Well written ,! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi.
Date: 8/4/2023 4:55:00 AM
Powerful and poignant ~ tragedy of our times.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments.

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