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Delving Into the Depth of Silence

When golden starlight abandons darkened skies
and halcyon silence greets the paling of dawn...
that's when I am able to solemnly contemplate
my awakened sentiments in tranquil solitude.
Before the world awakens as if in a rendezvous,
I linger amidst an interlude, a quiescent tryst.

When darkness fades to aurorean glints,
I witness the painting of a nuanced murk.
There, upon the birth of the sun's horizon
is brushed a blended mural in pastel tints
slowly rising from the gently rippled sea.
On a raft of serenity, I find myself afloat,
eyelids closed but able to see more clearly
than when they unfold to bustling scenes.
I am serene in the placid hush of daybreak,
listening to the truth of life's one true purpose.

Too often we scurry as ants in hurried moments.
In blurred visions my eyes behold the world's
noises pelting my ears like tympany drums
obscuring significant thoughts from my mind
until I could make no pertinent sense of it.
But silence explains everything in vivid detail.
It enlightens me, leading me into a quiet realm
where I am in harmony with peaceful silence
and filled with an overwhelming sense of stillness
that delves deeper than any sound could proffer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Turner Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 8:34 PM
Hear no evil, see no evil, speak no evil...enlighten is indeed the correct word. (IMO) when one finds inner peace, only then will they know true silence. Great subject and very well written, as usual:)Nice write, Lin.
Lane Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 12:25 AM
Inner peace allows a clearer vision and a keener sense of perception. Thank you for reading me, Danny.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Silence is truly golden Lin ~ unlike that infernal city din! Hard to appreciate until we (hear it) in its full glory, just like you express here in this wonderful poem, cheers David
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 3:39 PM
The phrase, "I can't hear myself think" came to mind, David. We can hear the beauty of silence. I listen to it every morning before the world around me wakens. Just me and the songbirds. Thanks so very much.
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 2:36 PM
Great!
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Thank you.
Lawless Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 1:09 PM
"I witness the painting of a nuanced murk"...That line got me, Lin. A beautifully meditative poetic expression coaxing the reader to relax, be still, exhale...
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 3:37 PM
I love when a comment points to a particular phrase as being something that caught their eye. Thanks for doing so, John. I appreciate that.
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Nothing beats it Lin, the sound of silence. I grew up in the city and over 30 years ago we moved to a countryside town, best move I ever made. Tom
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 3:36 PM
I've lived in both types of environments; Tom and I will always choose country life over the city when possible. There's so much worth hearing that can't be heard over city din. Thanks a bunch.
Rose  Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Lin, this is utterly beautiful. You gave silence a voice here, and oh what a message it delivered. Very well done, :)
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 3:34 PM
Thanks so much, Vie. Silence does have an important role, if only we take the time to listen.
Gentile Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Alone with one's thoughts in silence is indeed for me a most fruitful experience! Lin, you have very beautifully crafted lines which capture one's mind, enticing the reader to seek such serenity when silence comes to fore! Happy Friday xxoo
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Mike. It may sound strange, but although I value silence and my alone time, there are moments when subtle sounds soothe me. ie...songbirds greeting the dawn or the soft whirring of fan blades, and of course the trickling waters of a stream. Your comments always lead me to new thoughts.
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