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The maple, beech, the willow, ash and oak - abundant are the trees that shed their leaves, and in the spring, the goddess Flora weaves her magic, vanishing cold winter’s cloak. Sometimes the roots of shade trees need a soak. A tree in drought most gratefully receives the summer rains. By autumn it achieves sheer brilliance. Memories autumn days invoke. Like trees deciduous are people too. With warmth we flourish. Also we are green, not having lived our lives yet for too long. Through summer more of life we can pursue. By fall, we’re colored by all that we’ve seen. Then winter comes, and life we can’t prolong.

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Date: 9/25/2024 10:38:00 AM
Marvelous poem, Andrea. Love the connection between nature and life. Blessings to you. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/17/2024 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this exquisite Italian Sonnet and wonderful win my dear poet friend Andrea! Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks also for appreciating my simple poem for you. God bless you always, your family and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 9/16/2024 1:22:00 AM
I'm with Paige I love the line "we’re colored by all that we’ve seen." but the whole sonnet is super"we’re colored by all that we’ve seen."
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2024 11:20:00 PM
Thank you, Terry
Date: 9/15/2024 9:12:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I’m delighted to return with my congratulations for your success in Craig’s contest. Loved you take on the theme. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2024 11:20:00 PM
Thanks. Dear.
Date: 9/13/2024 8:53:00 PM
Nice twist in the sestet. I enjoyed your deciduous piece. Great imagery in the octave.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/14/2024 8:23:00 AM
thanks, Reason. I don't expect a win, but I had fun with this one.
Date: 9/4/2024 11:16:00 AM
On the first walk I had taken into a new town where I had just moved, I saw, to my shock and surprise, a variegated (two tone) Trident Maple! I didn't know such things existed. It was 'love at first sight' and I thought to take a cutting, possibly, to bonsai it. ~ When I get to heaven, if there are no trees, I won't stay! _________________ https://tinyurl.com/m5bmctw2 ]
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Robert Warlov
Date: 9/7/2024 8:49:00 PM
" . . . Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all ye know on earth, and all ye need to know." - Keats - "Ode to a Grecian urn" ~ So much beauty in the world. How could I not be a poet?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/4/2024 11:56:00 AM
That's awesome, Robert
Date: 8/27/2024 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poetry- I loved especially "we’re colored by all that we’ve seen." about Fall...
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Date: 8/26/2024 12:03:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I like the way you've connected cycles of Nature with the human experience of life. Your poetic introspection is beautiful and somewhat similar in thought to the poem I wrote, but have not posted yet, on this contest theme. Your imagery is stunning. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:57:00 AM
wonderful, you revealed like a secret from trees, just amazing dear poet, waw thanks yann
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Date: 8/25/2024 5:29:00 PM
I can see those trees lining the streets! … Sometimes the roots of shade trees need a soak. A tree in drought most gratefully receives the summer rains…Tough to write and you did a great job, Andrea!
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:24:00 AM
Who can prolong life? Your Italian sonnet is studded with great imagery of nature and all that life offers. Five lovely trees and the rainfall that we all need at this time here. Hugs
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:08:00 AM
What a descriptive sonnet this is, so well written with such beautiful and poignant imagery, that depicts the word prompt so eloquently! I love your rhymes and also the flow of this especially love “ Through summer more of life we can pursue. By fall, we’re colored by all that we’ve seen.” how youv used nature and seasons to describe time of life and what weve seen etc is impressive and flows with wisdom! Wise soul you are! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 8/23/2024 10:36:00 PM
Nice analogy, touches the feelings in the winter of life. Best wishes.
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Date: 8/23/2024 10:28:00 AM
Nice poem correlating nature and human life.
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