Deciduous

The maple, beech, the willow, ash and oak - 
abundant are the trees that shed their leaves,
and in the spring, the goddess Flora weaves
her magic, vanishing cold winter’s cloak.
Sometimes the roots of shade trees need a soak.
A tree in drought most gratefully receives
the summer rains. By autumn it achieves
sheer brilliance. Memories autumn days invoke.

Like trees deciduous are people too.
With warmth we flourish. Also we are green,
not having lived our lives yet for too long.
Through summer more of life we can pursue.
By fall, we’re colored by all that we’ve seen.
Then winter comes, and life we can’t prolong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kerr Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 1:07 AM
Hello Andrea, Thanks once again for your comment on Sound Of etc. This sonnet has extraordinary rhyme patterns and a tremendous line to line flow. By the way, Congratulations on your My Inner Child first medal win, Howard
Kauffman Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Marvelous poem, Andrea. Love the connection between nature and life. Blessings to you. Congratulations on your win!
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on this exquisite Italian Sonnet and wonderful win my dear poet friend Andrea! Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks also for appreciating my simple poem for you. God bless you always, your family and your writings. Hugs
Miller Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 1:22 AM
I'm with Paige I love the line "we’re colored by all that we’ve seen." but the whole sonnet is super"we’re colored by all that we’ve seen."
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 11:20 PM
Thank you, Terry
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Dear Andrea, I’m delighted to return with my congratulations for your success in Craig’s contest. Loved you take on the theme. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 11:20 PM
Thanks. Dear.
Poteet Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 8:53 PM
Nice twist in the sestet. I enjoyed your deciduous piece. Great imagery in the octave.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:23 AM
thanks, Reason. I don't expect a win, but I had fun with this one.
Warlov Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 11:16 AM
On the first walk I had taken into a new town where I had just moved, I saw, to my shock and surprise, a variegated (two tone) Trident Maple! I didn't know such things existed. It was 'love at first sight' and I thought to take a cutting, possibly, to bonsai it. ~ When I get to heaven, if there are no trees, I won't stay! _________________ https://tinyurl.com/m5bmctw2 ]
Warlov Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 8:49 PM
" . . . Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all ye know on earth, and all ye need to know." - Keats - "Ode to a Grecian urn" ~ So much beauty in the world. How could I not be a poet?
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 11:56 AM
That's awesome, Robert
Hind Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Beautiful poetry- I loved especially "we’re colored by all that we’ve seen." about Fall...
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Dear Andrea, I like the way you've connected cycles of Nature with the human experience of life. Your poetic introspection is beautiful and somewhat similar in thought to the poem I wrote, but have not posted yet, on this contest theme. Your imagery is stunning. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Rolland Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:57 AM
wonderful, you revealed like a secret from trees, just amazing dear poet, waw thanks yann
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 5:29 PM
I can see those trees lining the streets! … Sometimes the roots of shade trees need a soak. A tree in drought most gratefully receives the summer rains…Tough to write and you did a great job, Andrea!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Who can prolong life? Your Italian sonnet is studded with great imagery of nature and all that life offers. Five lovely trees and the rainfall that we all need at this time here. Hugs
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:08 AM
What a descriptive sonnet this is, so well written with such beautiful and poignant imagery, that depicts the word prompt so eloquently! I love your rhymes and also the flow of this especially love “ Through summer more of life we can pursue. By fall, we’re colored by all that we’ve seen.” how youv used nature and seasons to describe time of life and what weve seen etc is impressive and flows with wisdom! Wise soul you are! Best wishes for the contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 10:36 PM
Nice analogy, touches the feelings in the winter of life. Best wishes.
Narain Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Nice poem correlating nature and human life.
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