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Dead Winter

wind blast cold to bone plants, animals frozen stiff dead winter kill off Written By: Carol Brown Written on: 12/13/2011 Written for the: " Dead Winter Contest" Sponsored by: Sidney~LeeAnn 4th Place Winner

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2012 1:45:00 PM

live renewing itself with rest! Congrad's Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 1/16/2012 3:45:00 PM

where the strong go on, and the weak go down , but nature belongs... though we may frown .... well done Carol...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for the congrats evewryone. It is truly appreciated. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/16/2012 10:26:00 AM

Congratulation, my friend, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2012 1:57:00 AM

A great win Carol congratulations x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 10:39:00 PM

CAROL,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2011 8:13:00 AM

Carol, a very good image... good luck in the contest..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 12/13/2011 2:44:00 PM

Winter does what does Carol. In the animal world, and even in our world, it separates the weak from the strong. Good luck in the contest with this fine Haiku. Have a wonderful festive season my dear poetry friend :) xx

Greg Stanley

Date: 12/13/2011 11:51:00 AM

Carol, very nice and said so strongly... burrrrrrr... good luck in the contest. Thanks for reading my poetry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/13/2011 6:15:00 AM

that's exactly how i think of it - cold to the bone, stiff, and dead. great description :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/13/2011 5:48:00 AM

I can relate to this one, Carol...Your less than an hour away and I feel my own "dead winter kill off!" Good luck in this contest. It was a tricky one for me. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song
Date: 12/13/2011 5:49:00 AM

you're....ooops