Dante's Divina Commedia Translation
The difficult translation of first Canto of Divina Commedia is here completed
In the part published before, Dante imagined to find himself in a dark forest where he met three beasts.
Now he is going to meet the poet Virgilio who will bring him through the Hell and Purgatory.
The original italian is omitted for simplicity.
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And such as guy acquiring with decision,
And comes the time which brings him then to lose,
So that his thoughts with sorrow find collision;
Similar the peaceless beast with strong abuse
Coming against me direct bit by bit
Constrained me with shadow to confuse.
And while compelled to slide down and quit,
Before my eyes just the faint view appeared
Of who for long hush seemed to have no fit.
When I saw him in the wide desert cleared,
“Miserere of me”, I screamed to him,
“If you to shadow or to man adhered”
Replied: “I'm not now, man I was not dim,
Lombard my parents just certainly were
Both from Mantua, their home with vim.
Arose sub Julio, even late occur,
And lived in Rome under August good
In times of liars false gods and faith blur.
Poet I was, and sung of that with just mood
Anchise’s son who came in a trip from Troy,
When superb Ilion burned as a wood.
But why you follow of trouble the decoy?
Why the delectable hill don’t you rise
Which is the start and cause of a full joy?”.
“Are you now that Virgilio source wise
Who spreads of words a so ample river?”.
I answered him with my shameful eyes.
“O of other poets light and honor giver,
Might I have gain from long study and love
Which made me look for your work with quiver.
You are my master who inspires above,
You are the only one from whom I took
The stile admirable of my honor shove.
The beast which made me run away now look;
I beg your help, indeed famous wise man,
‘Cause me a trembling in veins and pulse shook”
“To take another trip better you can”,
He answered, when saw my weeping pain,
“If out of this savage place you want to scan;
Since this beast , which causes your complain,
Nobody allows its way to align,
But fights against him until is slain,
And its nature is so ruthless and malign,
That never fills in its greedy will,
And is hungrier after than before dine.
Many are the animals with which joins still,
And even more will be, until the hound
Will come, and shall it painfully kill.
This one by richness will not be bound
But by wisdom, love and virtue alone
And between two felts will come and found.
Might help that Italy to humble prone
For which lost life Camilla virgin pure
Eurialo, Turno and Niso killed as known.
This one will hunt it hard in every moor,
Until it will fall in the deepest hell,
Just where from it started envy impure.
So for your sake I think and judge well
That you should follow me, your guide,
And I will shepherd you in endless dell;
Where with desperate shouting you shall collide,
You shall see ancient spirits in their pain,
Who are all shouting to be again died;
You shall see those who happily sustain
To stay in fire, hoping to come back
No matter when in the blessed domain.
Where you can climb following the track,
A more worthy soul than me will be:
With her I will leave you, this is my tack;
Since the great emperor who there up can see,
'Cause I was a rebel against his law,
To guide you there forbids that I be free.
He commands everywhere and puts his awe;
Here resides his domain and lofty throne:
Lucky the people elected to this joie!”.
And I to him: “Poet, my need is here shown
In name of God you did not even know,
To escape this evil maybe not alone,
That you now bring me where you told to go,
So then I see the true saint Peter’s gate
And also people you tell afflicted so”
And when he moved, him I followed straight.
Copyright © Mario De Paz | Year Posted 2013
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