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Flannels warms the soft skin behind, the silk topper brushes chin ward. The air hangs heavy with the scent of lavender and all is as it should be by moonlight. Honeyed beams strike silver tendrils tossed upon a pillow case. Bhram's laces the sultry air. Dark chocolate covers my tongue and lips Chianti flows between breathes and the night rises with upthrust hips to crescendo in the the dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/16/2012 8:53:00 PM
Number one for me. Congrats Debbie
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:54:00 PM
Scintillating!!!!Wow! You ended this with a real crescendo that reverberates all the way across the ocean to Hawaii. I loved it! Bravo on your win. Wish it didn't hurt my eyes so to stay on here a long time. A Fav.
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:07:00 AM
DEBBIE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 10:12:00 AM
It is very warm,Debbie.Congratulations!Also,thank you very much for placing me among your winners.With love FAB
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Date: 2/11/2012 2:35:00 AM
Truly sensual :D congrats
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:38:00 PM
wanna jump into that slow fire, debbie.. undertones of a foreplay, my!.. congrats on your win in my contest!:) huggs
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:57:00 AM
Very nice write. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:42:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Debi on your win in the contest.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:27:00 AM
Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Congratulations sexy lady! (Hope you are hanging in there....I'm thinking of you :) Hugs!!!
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Date: 2/10/2012 8:41:00 AM
congrats Debbie on another excellent win for this sexy submission luv..
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie xx
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:57:00 AM
Very nice Debbie..Lots of great images to think on. Congratulations. :)
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:59:00 AM
whoa sexy Deb you are putting our minds in overdrive. ....dark chocolate covers my tongue and lips...Up trust hips... yes definitely have the sexy in this write. love phyl
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Date: 2/4/2012 7:57:00 AM
ok.....I like it! (well, truthfully, rockin'!..... literally!) jimbo
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Date: 2/3/2012 3:09:00 PM
Great poem! Warm and sensefull! xoxoxo Laila
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Date: 2/3/2012 11:05:00 AM
taking it to the "Hilt"on.
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:40:00 PM
Enjoyed it...good one.Best wishes.
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